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| Quick-Demon 2008-09-15 ch 6, | abuseAnother awesome chapter! Looks like Anton got away with it... kind of. Though if it wasn't for Dean he would of done it. I feel almost sry for the bystanders who watched Ruby get up painfully and walk... lol Update soon! |
| sendintheclowns 2008-09-14 ch 6, | abuseAnother excellent chapter. And I love how you end up on an amusing note. So is Anton hot on their heels? I can see why bumping into another hunter would be reason enought for worry. |
| sammygirl1963 2008-09-13 ch 6, | abuseFantastic chapter! Thank goodness Dean got there in time to keep Anton from killing Sammy. IO can imagine the sheer look of abject horror that must have been on those old peoples faces when Ruby got up from something that by all rights should have killed her! |
| carocali 2008-09-13 ch 6, | abuseGood thing that Dean has a Sammy homing device or Anton would be making mincemeat of Sam. And I doubt that's the end of him... How will Ruby's fall affect her? She can heal, but that was pretty traumatic, along with all the other ill effects she's been dealing with. Will she be able to help the boys in time? What's next for Sam? He can't seem to tell Dean what's going on. Will that be his demise? More please! |
| Blue eyespark 2008-09-05 ch 5, | abuseHey, you did a nice touch. Sam still being a powerful fire bomb still try to supress his rage, a hunter and demon teaming up. I hope u update soon, couse i want to know what happens to sam and of course to see what dean will try to do. Anyhow like your fic. |
| sendintheclowns 2008-08-31 ch 5, | abusePhew! The argument between brothers was intense! I know I'm out numbered but I like the character of Ruby and really like how you utilize her in your story. So what are you going to throw at us next? |
| kirallie 2008-08-17 ch 4, | abuseSo Sam's still fighting the rage, not good. Will Ruby get to them in time to explain before the hunter does? How will they react to him coming after Sam and can Sam beat him? Keep up the good work!! |
| SalemsChild 2008-08-16 ch 4, | abuseAbsolutely love the story. I'm especially enjoying how you portray the deep love Dean and Sam have for each other, resulting in both of them trying so hard to hide their emotions and worries from each other. You've got a great mix of spot-on characterizations, complex plot, Limp!Sam and emotional angst going. Can't wait for the next update. |
| carocali 2008-08-16 ch 4, | abuseSam is in for some big-time danger. He's dealing with his own feelings of anger (and loving them) and trying to control/hide them from Dean. Dean is fighting his own inner demons, realizing that what his father told him may be a reality. He'll fight to the end to try and save his brother, but what if he doesn't have a choice... And Ruby's theory about the knife intrigues and scares me. Sam absorbed the power? Yikes! Lastly, we have a demon and hunter pairing up? That can never bode well for our boys! Great update! More please! ;D Caroline |
| Quick-Demon 2008-08-13 ch 4, | abuseAwesome!! I was so happy when I saw this was the sequel to Surface Appearances! I know... I only found it just now... Its great so far, with a storm brewing on the horizon and plenty of angst for the both of 'em. It's gearing up to be one of the most exciting stories I've read in a long time! Please update soon! |
| sendintheclowns 2008-08-12 ch 4, | abuseI like how Ruby's knife plays such an integral part to the story: '...Sam had somehow absorbed the power from her knife over the weeks since he’d come into contact with it. Now her knife was useless, and Sam was twice as powerful as he had been originally.' Yep, Sam's an even bigger threat to Lilith and she'd be hot to deal with him. Uh oh, more players on the field who want to level Sam. Great stuff! I'm eager for more. |
| sendintheclowns 2008-08-01 ch 3, | abuseI love the whole angle of Dean wondering if Sam was changed by the cut from Ruby's knife. Echoes the whole "did Sam come back 100% Sammy" plotline. Wow, this story is even more action packed than the last one and that's saying something. Count me in for the duration. |
| sammygirl1963 2008-08-01 ch 3, | abuseWow, I wonder if Dean will be able to accept what Sammy just did without viewing him as "turning darkside" I mean he was already wondering if Sammy has changed sine Ruby's knife cut him...this is so not good! |
| carocali 2008-08-01 ch 3, | abuseThis is SO not good! And if any part of Sam just enjoyed destroying that demon, they are in a whole world of hurt! I love how elusive Ruby is during this and how she just shushes Bobby. Dean and Bobby really have no idea what kind of bomb is in Sam...althought, maybe now they do! But they can't just leave! What about all that laundry! :D Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one. And thanks for the recap! :D Caroline |
| sendintheclowns 2008-07-25 ch 2, | abuseI knew it! Sam is still hurting from that wound. I'm really happy you decided to give us a sequel. 'Sam just nodded back. He couldn’t get used to seeing his brother lately. For the past three weeks or so, Dean had been surrounded by a thick, black shadow, and there was a dark line across his throat, like it had been slashed. Death had already marked him as its own.' Cool stuff in this section. Creepy. Can't wait for more. |