Wow. I am impressed very few mpreg stories have a believe-able explanation. A definite fav.

Please write us all a sequel ! My love loved the story and she passed it to me, and now I love it too, for different reasons. I didn't expect the OCD and the self harming, but I sure as hell empathise with it. Thanks for airing something so taboo and so poignantly angsty.

this really had me crying, if only that I can say I've been there, done that, but mine didn't survive. I had no Jack to help me. I'm not letting you off lightly, you've written about something that is very real, pushed all my buttons and I truly hope you have never gone through it. But it was right, written well, with understanding, that feeling of utter dispair and guilt and bereavment. I liked Owen's care and dignity. Unlike Ianto, I didn't feel like commiting suicide over it, because that isn't in my personality, but the feeling of total helplessness watching this tiny little thing losing its fight for life, not once but twice... mine were not twins, they were a year apart. But one was a girl and so I lost my chance to have a daughter. All I can say is well done for capturing the essence of it, and keep writing. I actually liked the story. My happy ending was two lovely kids and a wonderful supportive husband, who didn't blame me. Why I lost two in succession no one could tell me, it just happens. Glad you gave them a happy ending. happy endings do happen in real life but its nice to be able to bestow them in fiction too.

Such a wonderful story..
I luv it very much..
It's full of angsty but it make the story more interesting and so good..
And..i'm very glad that their babies is okay..
I think they're really dead..
I almost cry ,you know..
But in the end everything turn beautiful..

This whole fic was fantastic ^^
I was put off by the Mpreg at first but it was actually really sweet. I feel converted lol
I couldn't beleive when the babies died :( I had a lump in my stomach reading about that bit lol. I was so happy when Jack saved them ^^
I love how you didn't turn Ianto into a girlo which always annoys me in Janto fics lol and I like how Owen was really nice (he rocks :P)
I can't wait to start reading the sequel :)

I liked this story a lot. The one thing I'm disappointed about is that the babies weren't given names at the end. You should write a story where Jack and Ianto name their babies. I couldn't review on the last chapter because the computer wouldn't let me go to it.

Ah. Sweet. But poor Jack and poor,poor Ianto. So sad :(
X

Lovely story. I really enjoyed reading it.

What a sad but beautiful ending. I've really enjoyed this story. I'm a big fan of the mpreg, and to see it end with two bundles of joy for Jack and Ianto, aww I'm all warm and fuzzy inside :) Thank you for sharing this with us and giving us some Janto love.

Aww, yay!
I felt so sorry and scared for Ianto when the babies died, and i really thought he was gonna kill himself!
Such a nice happy ending, Jack bringing them back to life.
Loved it!
Sequel maybe? Of them raising the kids together? Up to you, but that would be awesome!
xx

I am glad that Jack saved the babies...well done

OK< you scared the you know what out of me when the babies died. Thank God Jack got back in time. If he'd been a few minutes later...
Are we going to be visiting the happy family (I hope)?
Judy

*burns her plot to do something mean to you* AW! SO cute and I was all like no you cant kill them! But I like how you ended it.*puts her weapon(a spork) away too*

You had me crying and crusing you at the same time. That was NOT nice! Thank you for a happy ending.

okay, seriously? you almost made me cry in the Panera Bread. DO NOT KILL OFF IANTO'S BABIES WITHOUT WARNING!

Anyways, good story I greatly enjoyed it!