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Solsbury Girl 7/24/08 . chapter 2
Interesting start; not a fan of mpreg either but the comedy moments swayed me. I also liked the idea that Owen had an *old* ultrasound machine, so in keeping with the Hub - lots of new high tech stuff, and a smattering of older stuff to give it a lived in feeling.

It might just be worth running things through a spell checker before posting. OK, so I'm picky!
Thenerdswillwin 7/24/08 . chapter 2
aw i love this, god i hope jack is the father... mother... whatever you know what i mean
gaia-x-goddess 7/24/08 . chapter 2
What is happening? well, obviously Ianto is pregnant. But with what?

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ninjabread-helen 7/24/08 . chapter 2
haha that's amazing

D

update soon please?

xx

ly

helen
Hypergirl321 7/23/08 . chapter 2
I can see Owen hold a finger up to each thing he listed. And like how you made Ianto be like nope but while Owen was moving it down he found the baby! LOVED IT!
hotflower901 7/23/08 . chapter 2
Oops. Jack may have some explaining to do.

good chapter
Elanor16 7/23/08 . chapter 2
I wonder why he get pregnant! :D
Flowerfairy30 7/23/08 . chapter 2
Ops! Always use protection. Poor Ianto.

Please update soon.
bbmcowgirl 7/23/08 . chapter 2
This is going to be great. I'm already hooked and can't wait for more. I sure hope Jack will be happy that he's going to be a dad. Just a suggestion though. You might want to find yourself a beta to help with grammer and punctuation. Otherwise, it's a great story.

Judy
gaia-x-goddess 7/23/08 . chapter 1
Well, if it's Ianto I'll read it althugh mpreg usually puts me off. But this was written well so I'll be interested to see where it's going.

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hotflower901 7/22/08 . chapter 1
A quick MOT?
ForeverBossy26 7/22/08 . chapter 1
Besides being and angst fan. I love Mpreg stories. I can't wait to see where this is going. Please don't torture us too much with cliffhangers :) Can't wait till more.
Hypergirl321 7/22/08 . chapter 1
Coffee smelling bad to Ianto the world is ending! lol Well cant wait for the next chapter.
lockedinabathroom 7/22/08 . chapter 1
Nice start, hope you continue! :)
LilianBlake 7/22/08 . chapter 1
interesting... I like Mpreg! It's so rare to find one where it's Ianto that's pregnant.
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