This was so cute. I can relate to Edmund here: I always burned the toast, even to the point where smoke was coming from the toaster.

Poor Peter! He had such troubles with the eggs.

And, poor Mrs. Pevensie! I give her a lot of credit for touching that 'coffee'. Anywho, great story! Loved it!

this was ADORABLE. i never was allowed to make either of my parents breakfast without the other one supervising. i believe it was for this exact reason. kids just try so hard you have to love them for their efforts. :)

oh! god! good, I'm still Alive, i never really thought that you could die of laughter hahaha, whoo, i feel so out of breath from too much laughing, just wondering what do ash taste like? :D

Lol. This is so cute! I can imagine Peter and Edmund's matching teddy pajamas. hehehe

I nearly died of laughter! Thank you!

This is a very funny story! I am at school & it is 2:07 pm and I am trying not to laugh! Renesmee Cullen101

Hehehe

They're in for it!

Ha ha! That was great! : ) There were a few spelling errors so you might want to look back over the story. Anyway, awesome job! : )

In Aslan's Name,

Queen Susan the Gentle

Cute...

Love it!

Luna

cute story. I think it could have been a little funnier but it was still very cute.

This is absolutely brilliant! I am two years older than you and my stories are absolutely rubbish! Thanks for keeping us entertained!

Favorite Line:

Edmund rushed down the stairs, stumbling slightly and grabbed a banana from the fruit tray. While running up the stairs, he dropped it and accidentally stepped on it. He felt the mushy fruit squish beneath his toes and he picked it up, heart thumping. The fruit seemed to be okay, and he rushed upstairs to meet Peter.

Someone's in trou-ble!

This is seriously the FUNNIEST FIC i ever read! LOVE IT!

That was so cute. I was laughing at Helen's expressions. HAHAHA!

That was HILARIOUS! You seriously rock at writing, those idea bunnies sure get to you. Keep writing!