|Reviews for Of Squashed Bananas and Burnt Toast|
| Ailis Ceana 9/24/11 . chapter 1
This was so cute. I can relate to Edmund here: I always burned the toast, even to the point where smoke was coming from the toaster.
Poor Peter! He had such troubles with the eggs.
And, poor Mrs. Pevensie! I give her a lot of credit for touching that 'coffee'. Anywho, great story! Loved it!
| SeventhTatar 1/16/11 . chapter 1
this was ADORABLE. i never was allowed to make either of my parents breakfast without the other one supervising. i believe it was for this exact reason. kids just try so hard you have to love them for their efforts. :)
| forNarnia 12/30/10 . chapter 1
oh! god! good, I'm still Alive, i never really thought that you could die of laughter hahaha, whoo, i feel so out of breath from too much laughing, just wondering what do ash taste like? :D
| hikaricute 12/20/10 . chapter 1
Lol. This is so cute! I can imagine Peter and Edmund's matching teddy pajamas. hehehe
| CN 2/18/10 . chapter 1
I nearly died of laughter! Thank you!
| TheLonelyDancer 10/13/09 . chapter 1
This is a very funny story! I am at school & it is 2:07 pm and I am trying not to laugh! Renesmee Cullen101
| Taryn Streambattle 9/22/09 . chapter 1
They're in for it!
| Queen Su 2/6/09 . chapter 1
Ha ha! That was great! : ) There were a few spelling errors so you might want to look back over the story. Anyway, awesome job! : )
In Aslan's Name,
Queen Susan the Gentle
| LunaNigra 1/25/09 . chapter 1
| LucyCrewe11 1/24/09 . chapter 1
cute story. I think it could have been a little funnier but it was still very cute.
| Faerygal189 12/23/08 . chapter 1
This is absolutely brilliant! I am two years older than you and my stories are absolutely rubbish! Thanks for keeping us entertained!
Edmund rushed down the stairs, stumbling slightly and grabbed a banana from the fruit tray. While running up the stairs, he dropped it and accidentally stepped on it. He felt the mushy fruit squish beneath his toes and he picked it up, heart thumping. The fruit seemed to be okay, and he rushed upstairs to meet Peter.
| Nikkster 10/18/08 . chapter 1
Someone's in trou-ble!
| rider 007 9/15/08 . chapter 1
This is seriously the FUNNIEST FIC i ever read! LOVE IT!
| Ipizzippy 9/13/08 . chapter 1
That was so cute. I was laughing at Helen's expressions. HAHAHA!
| Eternally Seventeen 9/4/08 . chapter 1
That was HILARIOUS! You seriously rock at writing, those idea bunnies sure get to you. Keep writing!