Good ending. The rest was pretty good, but the ending was near perfection, if not perfection it's self. Well done!

-dreamy sigh- Perfect.

My obsession with leather will never be the same. . I can't decide if this is good or bad.

i really liked this one

A perfect ending. Loved it. -Clare

Also here via a rec from Scatteredlogic, and I'm only sorry I didn't get around to reading this sooner! Wonderful piece, both for its steaminess and its poignancy. Thank you for sharing it.

Hello, I came to you throuth "scatteredlogic", thanks to "fangirl_tour".

I thouth you would apricciate a real review not just comment on a teaser.

This is really amazing, not even becouse it is your first "labyfic"...It was just right. Short, fine but efficient to the maximum. I didnt even miss the real "action" between J/S. The end was really satisfying and left in me such "oh, this could happen after it..or this...but it is still possitive!"

:-) wonderfull pats you*

This story was tagged on ScatteredLogic's Fangirl Tour. Faboulous offering. I want to say sweet, but there is nothing sweet about leather, only suppleness.

Thank you for sharing.

Er. Lustily Ever After I guess. *grin*

Spectacular

I read this one-gritty. Interesting to read your first fic. :)

Fantastic and rather breathtaking I must say. 'Less is more' most defiantly the case with this short story. Very well written. A shame it remains tucked away on page 17.

Wow. Stunning piece. Very well done. I loved every minute of it, and I can't wait to see what else you might be capable of.

o, that was hot. very thought-provoking take on sarah. i like it.

simply beautiful

MAGA GOOD!