MORE!

Oh wow, you are continuing this beautiful story - oh, I´m so glad! I alsways loved the humour and the emotions and all, John and the guys in this new role. Wonder whether John will make the time to tell his brother properly about Torren. And ja, though heartbraking, Woolsey calling off the chase doens´t come as a surprise and in a way he´s right, too - Michael will certainly come after them! But John being John and the team being ..well, they will find ways and means.

Lookinf forward to read more.

cheers

S.

oh no. John! Teyla! it's so sad, but you captured the characters and the heartbreak so well. Please continue soon!

Finally i was getting worried there. Poor John. Poor Torren and finally poor Teyla. I hope they fine her fast. Update soon.

You updated! I boogied! This was awesome! Poor Woolly, he really gets the crappy jobs; I would not want to be the one to tell John that... In that vein, I'm glad you didn't stomp all over his character, he's really quite funny sometimes. I'm absolutely dying to find out when they're getting Teyla back (and whether there'll be some shipping to be had...*cackles* I'm a fiend, I know...)

I was so glad to see another chapter of this fantastic fic - and what a wonderful chapter as well. More please...

Poor John! He's just so heartbroken in the end.

Ouch. Ouch, ouch. This last part TOTALLY fits the early Woolsey, slamming the lid down on everything. Well done, great chapter, and now I can't wait to see what happens! So glad you decided to continue!

I'm so excited that the next chapter is up. Really enjoyed it and looking forward to more. This is one of my favorite fanfic John and Teyla storylines.

Wow! This is great! I haven't seen this before and I just read all 10 chapters. Awesome job! Had me in tears and laughing at the same time.

I have missed this story!

Wow,Torren as a super Wraith detector, no wonder Micheal wants his hands on him. Can't wait to see how this develops.

I so love this fic. So well written and I can feel every emotion. You got me in tears. I only have 6 more chpts to catch up on. :)

Yay, update. I was wondering if you were ever gonna continue this. Keep up the good work and update when you can, it's appreciated.

So glad to see this back. What a wonderful powerful chapter. Love that Woolsey is being Woolsey but also being intelligent ... he's right Michael will come!

I really love this story and hope you can update soon. Beg, borrow, or steal someone else's computer if necessary. :)