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AsiasElementalGoddess
2008-08-25
ch 4,
abuseYou must make your chappies longer. No offense but like try making them longer. Oh yeah I have a little request for a story If ya want or not. This is what summer does to me. Okay it's like Aerrow likes Piper. Piper has a boyfriend she never talks about and a new random girl comes and starts havin a crush on thenew girl. YOu can borrow mine if ya want. Sarina. Look at my profile if ya want to know about her. I'll give ya more details on the story if ya pm me. LATER
SqueetheMoo
2008-08-24
ch 4,
abuseThis story is really good I can't wait to find out what happens next plz update soon ^_^
German Mickey
2008-08-23
ch 4,
abusewho is it?! update soon!
mrs stork
2008-08-23
ch 4,
abuseEVIL! HOW DARE U DO THIS BEAN
Sarina
2008-08-13
ch 3, anon.
abuseI LUV IT! WRITE MORE AND ALSO MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER PLZ! I HATE TO ABANDON A STORY WITH A REALY GOOD CLIFF HANGER! COME ON DONT MAKE ME SUFFER!
mrs stork
2008-08-11
ch 3,
abuseStork should meet a blonde human called liz who turns into a merb and they have a family, then radarr does the same but with abrunette called carol, who turns in to a pink...whatever radarr is

cute story bean update son plese
mrs stork
2008-08-11
ch 2,
abuseYAY bean storkdom and radarr-dom and miadom and aerrowdom and finndom and junkodom and...-sigh-piperdom.
YAY MORE!

Stork is smaxy lol
MissNimbus
2008-08-07
ch 2,
abuseooh, can't wait to see what's gonna happen next...
robister
2008-08-06
ch 3, anon.
abuseGreat story please update soon
German Mickey
2008-08-05
ch 3,
abusePoor Finn... lol
Black-Wolf-Warrior
2008-08-05
ch 3,
abuseHaha. Finn is in trouble. Hm...I wonder what Mia wil say when she see's Aerrow and Radarr.
Ok anyway, the only thing that I saw wrong was when Stork said "Their!" it's not that there silly. =P
I liked this chapter. The suspension grows! Update soon!

-blackwolfwarrior

P.S. Back to typing up the next chapter! =)
Black-Wolf-Warrior
2008-07-29
ch 2,
abuseOh! I know where they are going!I also think I know who Mia is!
Yay me!! =P
I am really enjoying this fic so far. Update soon!

-blackwolfwarior
Piper and Kairi
2008-07-25
ch 1,
abuseNice Great chapter Update soon!!



*Piper and Kairi*
German Mickey
2008-07-25
ch 2,
abusesounds interesting! please update soon!
mrs stork
2008-07-22
ch 1,
abuseyay bean i bag being first reviewer
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