this seems interesting so far. i would like to read more. hopefully more is up soon.

This is very well written! Adriana seems to me to be a very observant character, and that works well with the descriptions here.
I also like that even though you hint that there may be something between her and Dracula in the future, you certainly aren't rushing it. It makes it seem a lot less cliche. Though I still look forward to it... =)
Please update soon!
~Idhrenniel

Are you going to continue this? It's quite the interesting story. I'd love to see how it turns out. Tip: When there's another person speaking, it's supposed to be a new line/paragraph. It makes everything less confusing :)

Dialogue 101:
Whenever a new person speaks, make a new paragraph.
Duh.

wow this is a good story!
i really like Adriana and how strong she is even if she doesn't show it.
will Dracula and Adriana get together romantically?
update please!

seperate what they say from the rest of the paragraphs so it's more interesting and easyer to read.

Awesome new story. I'm already hooked. :)

i luv it! i can't wait for an update!