 Miss Erica Court 2008-09-24 . chapter 1I love this and if you update it I will love you forever...~ |
 weighed and measured 2008-07-25 . chapter 1You know, this is an interesting take~ Usually in fanfic the friends are either instantly approving or disapproving, in the case of the Romeo & Juliet FORBIDDEN TRAGIC LOVE AFFAAIRS. I honestly can't recall another fic where I saw them trying to stop them just because their bowling team would be uneven and eww, couply things! HOW WILL POKER NIGHT SURVIVE SUCH A THING? I actually expected Garet to go 'BUT I LOVED HER'.
It's also very funny, and not just funny witty Felix's deadpan manner and Jenna's 'Well I MIGHT'VE WANTED THAT OPTION" Made me giggle.
Ah, IsaacJenna debate. I went through all the details from a script run in the Isaac/Jenna community, and it got an interesting discussion going. Actually, that reminds me, I never got the Flame & Steam counterpoints up, as life ate me. Whoopsie.
I, uh, can't exactly link it, and it's way too long to c&p over here. Not to pimp my own things, but if you wanted too see some neutral takes + discussion, then this might be what you're looking for.
I've really never been a huge Mudshipper, (viva la slash :P) but this is utterly charming and I can't wait to see where it goes. Kudos. |
 BlackTestament 2008-07-24 . chapter 1You have my interest.
Looking forward to the next chapter. |
 NonFiction 2008-07-23 . chapter 1Haha well I enjoyed your first chapter. Felix seems like a real pimp lol. But seriously, the story is interesting and held my attention. Too bad the group has to be A-holes to Isaac and Mia.
Anyway, good luck finishing it up.
Ps- your humor is pretty good too. |
 killerbunbun 2008-07-23 . chapter 1i find this interesting and funny, go for it |
 Solis Knight 2008-07-22 . chapter 1I have read, and now i shall review, as i know the pain of just writing a story and having no reviews.
Your story is interesting, and just a tiny bit hectic. But hey, it isn't bad, and i think you should keep writing. You are indeed right, with the whole Madra sequence thingy she HAD shown feelings for Isaac, but it is indeed a twist in the plotline. I think you should pair her up with someone O.o
Anyway, i look forward to your next chapter. |
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