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sezjara
2008-07-23 . chapter 1
I like this story. I like how you got into Teyla's mind. I totally believe that the reasons you listed here could very well be the actual reasons she used when choosing a name for her son. You did a great job.

Thanks for sharing!
renisanz
2008-07-23 . chapter 1
I really liked this, how you had Teyla reflecting on choosing a name and how important it was to shaping the person her child would become. I like how she considered all the men in her life, weighed the good qualities and finally settled on the man that embodied all the attributes she wanted her son to possess. And yeah, the kidney stone thing killed it for Rodney getting a namesake. ;)
jtjaforever
2008-07-23 . chapter 1
Even though, she had not taken into account, as Dr. Keller had said, the name would annoy Rodney. Well, he should not have screamed like a little child when her placenta finally arrived before beaming into the Dart. To his credit, he did not drop her baby during the delay.

But still, kidney stones indeed.

LOL - Love it!!
neptune60
2008-07-23 . chapter 1
Very nice. I love Telya's musings on why she picked John as a name for her son. It's nice to see her rate her team mates so highly, especially John, but it makes it even harder to believe that she would pick a whimp like Kanaan as her partner.
godsdaughter77
2008-07-22 . chapter 1
That was a fun tag. Thanks for sharing it :D
jasminesmommy
2008-07-22 . chapter 1
lol yup rodney made me laugh when he delivered the baby :)
espergirl04
2008-07-22 . chapter 1
Can I just say that that was amazing? You captured them all perfectly, loved it!
WriterJC
2008-07-22 . chapter 1
Very nice. :)
faldo
2008-07-22 . chapter 1
Great little tag. Enjoyed this very much. Liked the way Teyla came to her decision about the name. Thanks.
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