aw, that was cute. i really liked that :) good job keeping everyone in character! some people make them OOC just to make it a good story, but it can be better if they act like themselves. nice job! :)
YAY! HitsuHina fluff! Thanks so much for writing this for me Teenie! Now that you have successfully written a great HitsuHina fanfic, don't you wanna write more? ;D You know you want to...Thanks again!