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Stealthmuffin.
2008-10-12 . chapter 1
HEY YOU.

YOU JERK.

YEAH, I'M TALKING TO YOU.

JERK.

I THINK YOU SHOULD WRITE SOMETHING NEW. ONLY MAYBE ON FPC SO THAT I CAN READ IT AND UNDERSTAND EVERYTHING AND BE ABLE TO TELL IF THEY'RE IN-CHARACTER (kindof).

JERKWAD.

: D
aniuwolfe
2008-08-08 . chapter 1
Ah!! I love it! I've always loved Wash, and I think you're captured the world of Firefly so well in this. Well done =)

Stay amazing!

~Aniu
oncethrown
2008-07-25 . chapter 1
I liked this alot. I personally loved River at the end, catching and comforting Zoe. I liked the explanation of how they fit together and I especially love her toying with his dinosaurs.
WitchesRevel
2008-07-24 . chapter 1
So sad but sweet. I love River in the end. :)
Lekta
2008-07-24 . chapter 1
That was so wonderful, I mean the story not actually the event of Wash's death. You really captured the characters personalities. River sounded fine, and we totally got what you were trying to say. Thanks for a great Serenity sequel.
xravenscroftx
2008-07-23 . chapter 1
That was wonderful- especially for a first story!

I love Wash too. :(

Wonderful job!
jane0904
2008-07-23 . chapter 1
Good first time. It was the list of things he wasn't coming to do that got me.
River4Jayne
2008-07-22 . chapter 1
good story...i liked it.
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