Koolio dude!... or dudette! I like it man, like it alot!

you did great, but in the 2nd chapter you said Miro was the oldest and in the last one you said he was younger than Yue
so which is he?

YOU ARE AMAZING
keep up the good work. seriously on of the best stories ive read, and its in a runique perspective. you go! oh and pleaasee update soon, IM DYING

Aw. D: Poor Yue.

I almost died laughing at the end of your introduction - "I don't own Avatar; if I did then I wouldn't have thrown away 2.5 seasons of hints and evidence and foreshadowing in 10 minutes."

~Marie

I like the direction this is taking, keep up the good work! :]

i really like it!! it's so different from anything i've read!! i can't wait to read more!

WOW!

i LOVED how you described zuko's voice as "sandpaper"

and i thought maybe they named their kid Azula and i was like ". . .wtf?"

lol nice start XD

~C

The series finale was horrible! D: Ah!

I'm looking forward to seeing how you repair their faults through your writing, though! xD

Please update soon!

~Marie

P.S. I'm personally waiting for them to release a message that the Kataang ending was just a joke. T.T