I am kind of glad that Axel's 2nd power was temporary, otherwise, he would have been cheap. LOL

But great story. I have to say, the writing style is very similar to mine for some reason. Keep it up. I like the ending.

I loved it, especially when Hunter and Colleen danced together at the end. Great job, and I'll be watching for your next story.

Nice ending!

Keep the good writing.

This is a great story, can't wait for the next road rover story!

White Hunter, howling out to you and the spirits!

It's great, especially when Colleen saved Hunter with the help of Axel, and when Hunter combined his attacks with Colleen's to knock out the terrorist leader...and Muzzle getting to come out to play is always a pleasure to read. Awesome job, and I'll be watching for the final chapter.

What a great chapter, I can't wait to see the final chapter.

White Hunter, howling out to you and the spirit!

Nice work on this fourth chapter.

White Hunter, howling out to you and the spirits!

Cool chapter. Funny... normally Blitz is the one making the mistakes.

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Keep the good writing.

The next chapter sounds like it's gonna be really exciting, and I look forward to seeing the Rovers kick the tar out of these terrorists. Keep up the great work.

Nice job, as always.

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Keep the good writing.

Great use of Axel's new power. What's happening with Exile and the others? Can't wait to find out

Great job, and I can't wait to see the Rovers fight their way out of this situation. I especially liked Axel reading the goon's mind to get the code for the storage bay.

Your welcome. One little thing though I would like to see develop is that this new power of Axel's could become permanent somehow. I hope to be seeing a great story unfold and"im sure I will. Keep up the great story

I love the new character Axel. His ability really plays well along with those of the other rovers. It's good to see another rover fan like myself who is making a story line that would make a wonderful series of episodes on the show if only it had not been cancelled. Ian't wait to see what happens to Axel as well as the other rovers next.

This is a good chapter, but I wonder who those bad guys were?

White Hunter, howling out to you and the spirits!