Very cool. I like seeing it from his point of view, kind of detached and psychotic. Well done. I like the end especially.

Oh goody. *That* was freakishly dark. But very well written and I enjoyed it. Good job.

All i can say is what were you thinking? The story was written well but the whole plot was absolutely out of here...

that was quite disturbing.

but but but... where is he then?

oh my goodness more sad fic day for Kelly

Wow, this is the 4th fic I've read by you that has a dead Marie in it. Good job though! :)

Wow! Very dark, but certainly a plausible story. Logan's character is very nicely revealed. Nice job!

wow that was great pice love how you did it and well i do hope you keep it up real good.