i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i hope Bella & Edward get Married soon plz

Amazing story! I loved write more about high drama AH please. :)

i love your story. it different and cool!

i love your story. it different and cool!

I can see how you really wanted reviews, but I would focus more on your story instead of long ANs. I am certain as you became older that probably changed. You know what I would like to see is more depth and description of your characters, their feelings, I would like you to go back and re-write this story, because if you have over 600 reviews for this story as it is, I bet you would have over a thousand if it is new and improved. With that said, I am glad Bella appreciates good music. I apologize for the criticism, I hope you know it is only to spur you on to better writing skills. As I said before this two years old, so I am certain your skills have much improved since this story.

You wrote their ages in the previous chapter, but are they in high school or college? I noted in the previous chapter that you wrote that Edward was studying to be a doctor, so I am confused as to what learning branch they are attending.

Cute ending to the chapter.

Amanda, this story is over two years old, but I will review every chapter to put more hits on the story, however, if the story starts to fall into cliche or grammatical errors outweigh the storyline I will just stop reading. I have read two chapters and I think it is a good story so far. A bit simplistic but you were only 14 at the time and that is amazing to me at that age to have a talent that can potentially lead to something even bigger. Please don't "tear tear" in your profile to be like Stephenie Meyer. I will say this Stephenie provided us with a romantic couple that will now live in the pantheon of literally couples, i.e. Romeo and Juliet, Mr. Darcy and Ms. Bennett, and Heathcliff and Kathy. Twilight was a good book, it is the rest of the Saga I have problems with especially the last one, so I would say make your own way into creative writing, if you not done so already, because you are good.

i loved yoour story!

i started crying cause i thought edward was gunna die so

i basicly stated to cry:)

but no i loved yoour story it was great i must admit

yoou should write more ones like this?:)

I probably should have reviewed each chapter, but I haven't had enough time today, and I just wanted to keep reading. I really enjoyed this story, OK there were a few spelling mistakes, but you know what, I didn't care for once all that much, as you story was soo good! (did that make sense? I seem to put in all too many words when I type/speak). Anyway, just though I should let you know that I enjoyed it!

loved it:)

keep up the good work

hrmmmm...JAMES? or Jacobetooo? My real guess in JAMEsETO

well, i didnt want to die, so im reviewing. i really love ur story, its amazing.

-syd

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