|Reviews for A Day in the Life of Ultra Magnus|
| electro moonlight 11/1/12 . chapter 5
no give them a good spanking that will humiliate them more
| electro moonlight 10/31/12 . chapter 2
who is this rox person?
| Prowls-little-hetalian 8/12/11 . chapter 8
*blinks* now I know why you didnt put this in the main fic...
| Prowls-little-hetalian 8/12/11 . chapter 7
AWWWWWWWWW! cute! Akima, Akima, Akima *shakes head* you neednt be so worryed.
| Prowls-little-hetalian 8/12/11 . chapter 6
I was laughing most of the way through this! hahahhaha, Magnus is soooooo clueless!
| Prowls-little-hetalian 8/12/11 . chapter 5
ah, the infamous "Magnus gets nailed in the crotch plate" scene, funnyer now that its in Magnuses POV! hehehehe!
| Prowls-little-hetalian 8/12/11 . chapter 3
oh poor prowler, dont worry, Jazzy will be back soon, as for the twins... *sticks foot out so they trip* Prowl will deal with them
| Prowls-little-hetalian 8/12/11 . chapter 2
he he he, they are just like human boys, only made of metal, can live forever blah blah blah, hehehehe, am correct in thinking this is the fateful day the Kacey hits Magnus in the croth plate?
| Prowls-little-hetalian 8/12/11 . chapter 1
oh Bumblebee, I look forward to the day when you and Kacey date, you are wise, and Magnus, hehehe, dont worry, there more to a fangirl than the rabid listening and obsession!
| FillyKat 6/21/10 . chapter 8
that was awesome! the story in its entirety has now become a fave of mine. not to mention i enjoyed the steamy moments between Akima and Magnus ;) great job!
| Bunnylass 7/31/09 . chapter 8
Whew, about time I came and reviewed this, WOWIE chapter, right? Yep, I thought so too! Sorry if it's a bit rushed though. Dinner is a calling me, lol. But I think it's safe to say I love Magnus ten times more with this last amazing chapter, than ever before. I'm SO glad you gave him a side-fic all his own. He deserves it! :D He was so sweet bashing himself up - figuratively - about what happened in the shower. I was kinda shaking my head at him and wanting to give him a big cuddle. All that contemplation over what he did wrong was some serious heavy-duty stuff! It was brilliant you put that in there, because it wouldn't have been Magnus otherwise. But yeah, I was feeling some love for him then, lol. :)
Of course, it turned out to be something totally innocuous in the end anyway...Which, by the way, was about the funniest thing you could have thought to do! There she was, trying to clean up the mess after ruining a towel. While Magnus sits and stews...God it was funny as hell! I'm glad Akima was so honest with him. I don't just mean about the towel, lol. But I also praised and whooped the way she was all; 'You weren't beating yourself up were you?' Good femme! I LIKE Akima! She's one awesome femme bot for him. :D And Magnus is so besotted with her...
I WANT HIM! *Coughs* Sorry, it's just so KYOOT! ;
Oh, OH! Wall-E! Good film once it gets going. :D Good choice for them too. Akima obviously enjoyed it. And Magnus obviously enjoyed watching Akima. .GOD! That was THE most BEAUITFUL part when he realised he loved her! OMG, I was so caught up in the moment and then the lyrics...It was sweetly perfect! Not over-done, no cliche's, no sappy stuff. It was purely just a beautiful, fantastic part! Hold on, I gotta go re-read it again. I HAVE to! :) YES! Oh, oh, oh! I LOVE THAT BIT! *Sniffles* I'm such a romance fiend. And that was incredible! :)
Until SUNNY WENT AND SPOILT IT! Oh I know I should probably NOT say this, but...It was, kinda, HILARIOUS! It had to be broken somehow. But the way Sunny did it! OMFG! It was too fun! :D Of course his mock beat up was just as good. But...yeah, Sunny I LOVE YOU! Not as much as Bee of course. SPEAKING OF! THIS - “OW! SUNNY!” Bee wailed.' WAS ADORABLE! Bee wailed like a sparkling! LET ME KEEP HIM! I could just imagine that as clearly as if he was right here. How can ANYONE be made at BEE? *Sighs dreamily* FTW that part! :D
Dun, dun, DUN! Ratchet and Kayla...Excuse me while I go laugh my ass off! Her sweetly innocent question was so...perfect. :) Of course Ratchet's twitching optic that his poor daughter is to be scarred for life was just as priceless. But shit yeah...That bit definitely brought more humor and lightened the mood even more! Until...Well, until it nearly MELTED MY SCREEN!
You're stories should come with a health warning! DANGER! MAY CAUSE YOU TO GO SLACK-JAWED AND NEED A COLD SHOWER!
OMG! This part...where they finally interfaced...was BEYOND HOT! Blisteringly SMOKIN'! No kidding, I could have done with a fan in my hand right then! :D I knew it'd be good. Hot DAMN, I just KNEW it! But FUCK! I was blown-away by it anyway. Floored I tell you! Not only because it was leaving me grinning like a fool and pretty well speechless. But also because Magnus was just so...sensitive. And caring; tender; sweet; loving...I could go on. But most of all, it was RAWR! Oh yeah, the room was definitely getting hotter while I was reading that part. BEST. BIT. EVER! AND if THAT is a sneaky peek of what's to come, well...I think I'll stock up on the ice now, thanks. ;)
Seriously, you couldn't have written it more perfectly. :) It wasn't just racy, it was beautiful too. Perfect! No wonder Phoenix freaked when she read this! I was pretty damn close to it too! Youch! And RAWR! Go Magnus and Akima! \m/ Love, love, loved it! Congrats on getting it finished. Oh yes, it was so worth the wait! :D NOW GO WRITE SOME KACEY/BEE! ;) Rock on, girl!
| I-don't-know-my-name4 7/31/09 . chapter 1
Nice one OP007. But I'm still strugling with the fact why Ultra Magnus is not like Optimus Prime, a truck.
| pikachu13 7/28/09 . chapter 8
Ive got to say, this was quite a nice mix of family fun and 'behind closed doors' intimacy. The part where everybody is watching the movie and messing around was so real and believeable, and the nooky scenes were so intimate and descriptive, VERY descriptive! I couldnt have written it better myself! (no seriously, I couldnt have!) But thank you for ending this story so perfectly! It really is a great story! for the adult in all of us. ;)
| Phoenix13 7/22/09 . chapter 8
Super Magnus fangirl is here! I am SO sorry this review is late! Get Plenoptic to smack me in the head, yeah?
Right, ::cracks knuckles:: I think I've read this chappie upwards of eight times by now, so I am well placed to do some commenting!
Magnus is being such a sweetie! See, every girl deserves a mech like him for their first time.
“Quiet down there,” I muttered under my breath when I felt my interface systems vibrating softly.
ROFL! Yes, that's what the reader is doing to! I wonder if Mags even has a pet name for whats down there too! Dinky? Superbot? 'The Thing'?
I was squirming during the movie watching, wanting the magic duo to GET. IT. ON.! If I'd had a cattle prod I would've chased them outta the room and into their quarters so the real fun could start.
AND AKIMA STARTS WITH THE KISSING FIRST! Go girl! And there's even aft grabbing too! Let me paraphrase Sunny - “SWEET!”
Ratchet was trying to keep his sparkling innocent from all the blatant kissing. Tsk. Magnus is so going to get an anal probe at his next exam. Lordy...
“Shh, it’s ok,” I cooed, gently cupping her chin in my hand. “You can trust me, love. I will not harm you in anyway. I’m going to overload you without interfacing with you.”
… and that was where my brain self-imploded and I had to scoop bits of it up off the floor...
OPTIMUS PRIME 007! God himself (Optimus? LOL) couldn't have said or done a nicer thing for Magnus to say to his femme! That was BEAUTIFUL! AMAZING! And frag, I want to be a femme bot so badly. Yes, hand me the strait jacket and white pills. I mean, you can't get better for a first time with your mech than hearing him say something like that. Wow.
Had to pick my brain off the floor again when Magnus retracted his armor to stand there in his protoform. I mean, it's winter here in Australia, but I was sweating. All that muscle, power, and gorgeousness – standing there with nothing on!
Magnus. In his protoform. Nothing else. Wanting to sweetly overload his femme.
And now they're nuzzling noses. Makes me wonder if Magnus has as big a set of noseplates as Optimus does in the movie (saw the movie for the sixth time today, God, Op is one handsome bot, especially in the close-ups in the NEST hangar in the beginning). You know what they say about big noses on men – and big feet! There's no way you could call Prime's feet small either! LOL
He used his fingers to climax her..? I need to sit down... no, wait, I AM sitting down! The room is tilting... help!
HIS MOUTH TOO? Are you trying to kill me?
“What about you?” she worriedly asked.
“I’m fine,” I replied.
YOU ARE NOT! Let the nice femme use her fingers on you too, Magnus! SIT! STAY! And spread'em! Oh God, he let his – you know what – out of its cage. Extended it. And Akima got to look at it!
“Wow…you’re kind of…big!” she exclaimed, optics a bit wide.
Akima, you are now officially my favourite femme. Really. She really knows what to say, doesn't she? Such a sweetie. We still have to sit down and have this little discussion about who is bigger though – Optimus or Magnus? I say Magnus. I do. DON'T YOU DARE DISAGREE!
“She nodded and I saw her optics were focused between us, watching what I was doing. I shifted my weight to one arm and reached between us, positioning the tip of my heated rod near her port opening. I know she has a small port but Primus made us all able to fit together. I knew it would stretch to allow my girth to penetrate her.”
Reading that bit, I was thinking that FFN itself might overload and blink out of existence. That is just beautiful. I think I forgot to breathe, and that only happens when I'm really caught up in a fic. Congrats to you for such wonderful stuff!
I'm going to be crude here – NOW ONTO THE HUMPING! Sorry. Couldn't restrain myself. Having too much fun. You know, this is so sad and yet so heavenly at the same time. I don't mind saying that I wish to God I was the femme underneath Magnus. Yes, I am weird. I admit it. Every woman has her fantasy – and I've found mine! LOL
Magnus is very skilled to change the angle at which he, um, entered her. Most men don't even bother thinking of it. It's just harder and deeper. But hit the right spot and change the angle – BINGO!
Holy God, this was wonderful! I can't say enough thank yous. I've been reading this chappie before I go to work to face the wrathful customers, and again when I come home. It really is pure magic. I ain't religious – far from it – but, BLESS YOU! A thousand thank yous!
And now I'd better get my brain in gear to write more fic for you! 'Femme For Hire' needs another update. Or I could continue with my sick Optimus fic, which doesn't have a name yet, and I haven't posted the first chappie yet either. We'll see!
| Spiritstrike 7/20/09 . chapter 8
Oh that was fantastic, OP! I swear you're damn good at making mechs and femmes have the time of their lives in their overloading and delicious moments together. Damn, I hope you make Kacey and Bee overload big time in the love story.
This was a brilliant story and I'm glad that Magnus and Akima were finally able to make love to each other. It was both exciting and new all at the same time for her, but all the while worth experiencing. Brilliant work! I hope to see some more side-story fanfics to your Kaceystar Trilogy.
Good luck on the final chapter to MBRS, it captured my mind and heart and I'm looking forward to your next side-story to it.