nice ending...but i prefer near x sayu...O.o

Near x Sayu are more better pair...make more plzz! O_O

Yeay! near x sayu the best! o

Why haven't you updated this history? It's great! Please, write more, I'd love to read it.

i loooooooooooooooooooooooove this story

i just wish it would have a little less... matsuda.

i love him and all but i find it a bit... wrong to have a minor charrecter play a major part in a story

near x sayue

Haha fluff with Matsuda how adorably... Well, i dunno. He's Matsuda. I'm fine with OCs

Great chappie! Awesome story too :3

So... it's been, like, two years. I mean, I assume that this has been abandoned, but...

IT"S SO GOOD! and you said that you had this all mapped out...

Hey! I'm back, stalking through your stories again!

Plz continue? I know it's been over a year... but you said you had a manuscript under your bed and know where this is going? (Yes, I read author's notes, did I mention I was a stalker yet?)

Anyway, I rather like Sayu/Matsuda instead of Sayu/Near, but I'm pretty much cool with whatever you write, (because, it's, like, amazing. Duh.)

XD.

I am finding this very intresting and I beg you; for the love of Near please come back to it!

My dear, it's been six months since you updated D:

You said not to let you abandon this one, so I shall NOT!

...

Please?

Your AN rambling is lovely, so don't let it bother you. The story made sense to me I've never seen anything remotely similar to this, and I probably won't again, so I'm going to keep enjoying it as I have for the last... chapter...

update soon please, and hopefully Near would come back in lol

My favorite part was when Sayu slapped Near,-that-was-awesome. The original robot-boy needs to be brought down a few notches and Sayu Yagami is just the one to do it.

Don't mind ocs all that much if their based on people seen in the book, so thanks for clearing that little issue up.

Loved it!

I've never read much Death Note fanfiction before, but this's the best SayuxMatsuda so far!

Keep it up, and update soon!

Voldemort

Oh, I love that you added Ryuk in there.

I keep forgetting that no one outside of the investigation team and Near's people knows that Light was Kira-the tension that adds into the story is really brilliant. Looking forward to the next update!