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| Ukkie 2008-08-04 ch 1, | abuseLovely story Becky!The mind is a funny thing isn't it? A smell can bring back long lost memories and so can food! Enjoyed this read. Thank you. Love, Nelleke |
| Kirsty Welsh 2008-07-23 ch 1, | abuseYou wrote "Starsky offered a crooked smile as he winked at his friend. The moment passed quietly between them, but the meaning was a loud foghorn in the mists of the unknown, guiding them both back to wellness and trust." I love that description! and what a lovely story, but what a klutz Hutch is. Fancy cooking that meal above all the others for Starsky. Why not a Paul Muni special? Or probably beef burrito with everything, hehe. thanks for sharing sweetie! Hugs, Janet |
| gaillardia 2008-07-23 ch 1, | abuseHiya-I loved "shootout"-but hated the ending-it made me squirm. Can you teleport back to the '70s and submit this story line instead please! Touching and funny at the same time-I loved it! |
| aussie angie 2008-07-23 ch 1, | abusea very interesting story I did like the bit about giant clams after him thanks again. |
| provencepuss 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abuseI liked this snippet food can do wierd thing to your memory and you got Starsky's feelings nicely here ...for me it is the smell of apples in a car (reminds me of being carsick on long journeys as a kid). I'd never lastr inthat heap of Hutch's would I? "A few days later, Starsky’s progress in physical therapy had included a first time effort to reach his left arm over and behind his head and touch the opposite shoulder. Of course, the action was accompanied by a few choice swear words and bullets of sweat popping out on his forehead and upper lip. Nonetheless, it was an accomplishment that deserved a celebration." Arrggh he has my sympathy - I injured a tendon earlier this year and at long last I can do my bra up behind my back! |
| brook5 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abusethat was really cute..very clever there |