My goodness...this was absolutely beautiful. You truly have a gift for writing. Our Grace, Prince Nuada, was so very in character that I do actually believe this could happen, and Mr Wink was so adorable. I nearly cried when our dear Orchid died, it was so well written. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

... I gotta had it to you. This is out by one the most awesome, heartbreaking story I have read so far in a Hellboy fanfic. Usually I don't read stories that's rated T because its not that exciting. But this... Wow... This story is wonderful. This story shows that not all humans are the same and Nuada realizes that and how a little girl became like a family to him especially Winks. Her death broke my heart because like I said shes part of their family now. It made me cry. It was so sad. The ending gave me goosebumps man. I love it. ... I LOVE THIS STORY!

No matter how many times I read the last chapter before the epilogue and no matter how hard I try, I can't keep myself from crying. It was wonderful!

I cried.

I cried like a baby. You're a very good writer. The last line... I had a feeling she would die, but I feel terrible now that she has. XD Fan fiction is serious business.

"Wink... did that just happen?"
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I have to say, I'm really enjoying this story. I snorted out the water I was drinking when I read that. I don't know if it was meant to be as humorous as I thought it was at that specific moment, but I had a good laugh. :)

This was the single most adorable thing I've ever read.

This chapter... awesome!

I know it's been a long time since you've been on , but I still enjoy reading your stories so much :) I adored the friendship between Nuada and the little fairy in the beginning, and if you ever consider writing a sequel or a spin off, you should totally consider having it be about those two! It was just such a unique and sweet concept.

I like this story so far. I find it well written and the figurative languge beautiful. My favorite analogy is the worm tunnel thing. Thumbs up! I'll certainly get this story read!

beautiful story i trully enjoyed it

...This is canon. I don't care what anyone says, I don't care what del Toro says, this is motherfucking canon.

The last chapters... I knew she was gonna die, obviously she had to, but it didn't prevent Orchid's last moments from being so emotional I ended up doing Nuada's shuddery breath thing to keep from crying (not intentionally, it just came out). Fantastic.

Just on thing to say. I do not cry very often. It's very difficult to make me do so.
After reading this story, I cried like a baby. And take it as a very compliment. Your story has such powerful emotional load, that it really blew me away.
Loved the characters, love the way you described a relation growing between them.
I am really speechless for I really cannot find words to describe how much I liked it.

*Bows*

MS

This was a very very good story and, of course, very sad. Sets up for Prince Nuada's entrance in Hellboy perfectly. It's so realistic too... so many battles beging over stupid things like a bunch of stolen grapes... and he threw them away even. Sigh. -Clare

that made me cry even though i sensed she was going to die. that was really good so good i'm writing this a four in the morning because i could not stop reading it.

so touching, the way you told Nuada's memory coming to bear and explaining why he hates humans. but his honor means he won't harm children

Amazing job. Really well written Prince Nuada fanfic. Hope you write more..maybe more "romance" Nuada fanfic would be nice.