Ouch! I never even considered that she may have thought Bruce didn't choose her... Very nice.

no. bad rachael. joker is a lieing maniac. Bruce loves you . Get over two face. Love Bruce! Why? Death sucks. Good fic, very nice interp of her last thoughts. All bruce. Very Good.

I really enjoyed this, as short as it was. You really captured Rachel; with that whole forced nonchalance and worry all at the same time!

Good job!
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I always knew that Rachel Dawes is not Bruce's soulmate. This story proves me right. Again. Thanks!

Another take on Rachel's last thoughts. I must admit that I prefer to think of Rachel being happy that Harvey was going to live, but I liked reading a different interpretation. Very angsty... now I need to find a humour fic to cheer me up!

Wow, that's an interesting point of view you created. Nice job.

Ouch. It may not be very PC, but it's deeply poignant. Well done.

Great story

Ouch. I confess, I thought that after what she saw and heard from Bruce, that she'd understand why he chose Harvey (slightly psychopathic inability to love and be loved aside, of course). This is a different take on what might have been going through her head, and it's awful to think that she might have died believing that Bruce was angry and leaving her to die, instead of saving the person that really could change his life rather than the girl he wished could do it. Thanks for depressing me — you're way too good at it. Keep up the good work!

Thanks for sharing!
Faren

I like the disorientation of Rachel's thoughts. It makes it seem very realistic. Her thoughts seem very in character as well. I liked this fic quite a bit. Great job!