This story is incredible. You write all of the characters so well, especially Hisoka. (He's my favorite.) I love the way you write Tsuzuki and Hisoka's burgeoning relationship; it feels very realistic.

I'm on the edge of my seat with all of this suspense, eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

Wowee! I feel like I'm in Tsuzuki's shoes. I feel like I was struggling to breathe when Muraki's getting too close for comfort on the truth.

I have been wondering on Tsuzuki's suicide. Did you have a theory of some sorts why he did it? I wish the manga-ka showed us part. Had she continued I'm sure we have a glimpse of Tsuzuki's past.

I hope whatever those two are going through from the touch see everything they are either hiding or want to tell the truth.

I know I'll have to wait long again. ^__^

Keep up the great work! *hugs*

Nice, very nice. You have great pacing and the wonderful/terrible suspense keeps me checking back to see if you've updated. So...UPDATE SOON. PLEASE?

I love a fic that has just the right amount of angst and fluff, especially a Yami no Matsuei one. Keep up the good work! ^^

! I can't wait to read more!! I don't think I've read a story lately that's had my heart racing in anticapation. Keep up the good work!!

ForgottenAyami!!

I'm sending you so very many good vibes - very, very many gushy, gushy good vibes - because, holy crap chicky, you're just amazing! I'm ridiculously impressed with your story and helplessly caught up in it now! Lurv it! Keep up the awesome work!

It's been so long since you've updated... and since I read this last! Still though, I'm really enjoying this story and I'll try to remember to keep checking back for updates (especially since I've been bored lately).


-Mey

Well, Tsuzuki's shields just became about as useful as an air wall. A 'what was that' at best. Keep up the good work, dark

yet again another brillantly awesome chapter!! i love what you did with the victim's family (that was great) and the twist at the end was just perfect... this was definitely one of the creepier chapters but i still loved every word of it... i know that i'm gonna love the beginning of the next chapter!!

yet again another brillantly awesome chapter!! i love what you did with the victim's family (that was great) and the twist at the end was just perfect... this was definitely one of the creepier chapters but i still loved every word of it... i know that i'm gonna love the beginning of the next chapter!!

You've got me on the edge of the chair in these last two chapters. Of course I'll send the good vibes for you to write more, cause I'll get the fever due to anxiety if you don't post the next chapter before Xmas.

~ sending good vibes ~ can you feel it? ;D

I love your writing style ^^

Yay! So happy to see the new chapter up, and what a great one it is. Muraki is so creepy he gives me chills--even when all he's doing is ordering lunch. And Tsuzuki's introspection about kissing Hisoka is gorgeous. And the ending--gah!! I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Done some background reading. Completely forgot the second part of this chapter! AH! So Hisoka has been cursed by that lady. And that's why he burned Tsuzuki. Creepy. Makes me want to find out what happens next even more.
-Penguin Girl

Ah! Another cliffie. I could kick Muraki right now. Poor Tsuzuki. He's very sensitive. And what the heck is going on with Hisoka? Did he actually set Tsuzuki on fire with his fever?! Can't wait for next update!

-Penguin Girl

What an evil cliffhanger that was. :P Thanks for the update! I look forward to the next chapter. <3