Hey Pointy Objects,

If I could only use one word to describe this it would be incredible. I absolutely loved it! I have been a fan of Hey Arnold since the tender age of nine and I have always loved the relationship of Helga and Arnold!

Through your writing I see the relationship on a darker dynamic and I have to say I liked it. Some of the chapters had me going Helga has gone crazy it is a true compliment to the inner workings of the psyche

Fan-freaking-tastic. I absolutely adore your work. And this is absolutely one of my all time favorite stories on this site. I'm going to start reading the prequel tomorrow! I can't wait! You have an amazing gift for story-telling.

Let me say this now...

H.O.L.Y.C.R.A.P.

As I was reading this... I was astounded, I was confused, concerned, a little amused... I knew something was up, I could just FEEL it. It took me till right before she wakes up from the Coma to realize that she was either A: dreaming B: Comatose or C: Locked up in a Psych ward for something that happened.

As soon as I read it though, it still managed to shock me. It was like I was reading a Novel, or watching a show - I could see it, Feel it, Believe it.

If you were to change the names, you would have an ABSOLUTELY PERFECT novel on your hands, I mean - SERIOUSLY.

I was enthralled the entire time, I'm so amazed at this, and when I finally looked up from reading, I realized I'd just blown all of... oh, 3 hours at work reading this? Not that it's a bad thing, mind you. I'm absolutely thrilled to have had the chance to read this (and THANK GOD it was dead at work today)

So, I say this: Thank you for the opportunity to read this story, and for the love of god, GET YOURSELF PUBLISHED!

I loved this story. It had me hooked from the beginning. The dark, morbid and humorous aura that surrounds it just draws you in. Still, after reading it, I keep thinking back to the "I'll bring potato salad!" scene and laughing out loud... it may not have been an important quote or scene, but the fact that Helga would be so carefree after just "murdering" her husband gets to me.

The Telltale Hart referencing I caught on quite earl , but the whole number 4 surprised me (I might've blocked it because I have not only number dyslexia, but an irrational fear of said number). All in all, fantastic story. :D Hope to see more dark themed once like this.

Oh my gosh, I LOVED this story!

I'm still shaking. That. Was. Phenomenal. And I don't throw that word out often. Incredible, INCREDIBLE work.

Omg I this was so messed up...but it was so awesome. Go Helga go! You teach that cheating bastard a lesson...to bad it didn't stay that way...although I liked the ending you gave it! lol Sorry...good story though! _ Ok until the next review I give you on on of your fabulous stories, take care!

Wow. Wow. What a story. I just couldn't turn away from the screen, really I couldn't. I'm so... wow. I have no words, and this is kinda sad, 'cause I my mind is racing. I loved it! Trying to piece everything together was so much fun. And while I had a feeling something of nature of a coma came at the end, it really was shocking to find out what really happened.

And ooh, the details were so interesting. I'm pretty sure I caught everything... other than the 4 business (though I had a feeling the numbers of the chapter titles were somewhat important). This was really fascinating, and quite different from what I've read in the past. Loved it.

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aka Pauline

I wasn't paying any attention to lit references and I'm terrible at math, so I'm just going to say, great story with amazing thought behind it.

Oh, that's funny...about Coke! I've seen pregnant women do a lot worse things than drink that. Now, the other stuff...that is a shame.

Anyway, once again, great story. Ha...I haven't read MacBeth since I was in high school. Keep up the great work.

-Jae-

Well done. I really liked the ending. Oh, and the epilogue was written nicely, especially the cookie humor.

-Jae-

What a way to end a chapter. Although I hate what happened I like the cliff hanger. Nice story telling here.

-Jae-

Nice use of red imagery in this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens when she meets her new arrival. btw, Happy way-belated Birthday. Keep up the great work.

-Jae-

First, let me just say that I LOVED this story. I can't believe that I haven't read it before. When I frist started to read it, I thought that it was Lila who had killed Arnold because he was with Helga. Then I couldn't believe that you had Helga kill him, but it does make sense because she could be so crazy about him that he couldn't live with someone else. (I never understood that. If you can't live without someone, why not kill yourself instead of them? But I digress) When she woke up in the hospital, I thought that she had lost the baby, but she didn't! YAY! I loved it and I really can't say enough about it. But one thing confused me. Did he cheat on her or was the coma induced also?

Amazing ending. ) This is my favorite story from you thus far. _

Very good detail about giving us the details.

Keep the good writing.