 samuraigurl1213 2009-10-11 . chapter 1 I'm sorry, I just had to review again. This fic is so good, everything just works perfectly. This is one of those fics I can come back and read at any time, and enjoy everytime. I always find myself smiling and loving every word.
This is really beautifully crafted. I love this.
I just thought you should know. |
 Tetsu Deinonychus 2009-05-07 . chapter 1I like the more thoughtful (yet still in character) version of Ulrich you depict here.
Also, like the "drug references". LOL
I certainly know what it's like to be addicted to a girl that way. Poor Ulrich! |
 Lyoko Lover 2008-07-25 . chapter 1Ok, I know I already PMed you with my review (since didn't work, argh), but I felt like I had to share it with the world. So, here it is again.
I hate this. This is so damn perfect it doesn't even deserve a review. I'm mad at you for writing such an amazing one-shot.
You wrote this in a way that makes the readers *feel* Ulrich's addiction.
Even the dynamics of the story is great. At the beginning, things are slow, just how they should be at one a.m.; then words and sentences start to go faster, and you read about Ulrich's drugs in a rush, at the point it almost becomes edgy; and then again, things re-starts to slow down, leading you to a perfect, and I underline PERFECT, ending.
I'm really trying to find something to criticize, but I can't find ONE thing.
I bow down at your almightiness.
This one-shot MUST go to my Fav List.
-Lyoko Lover, mesmerized (once again) by your writing skills. |
 BenRG 2008-07-24 . chapter 1Wow! Ulrich has it bad, doesn't he? :-o
I can imagine a sequel where the loss of sleep finally hits home and he has a psychotic break in the middle of class, storms out to where Yumi's class is doing PT and screams at her that she is ruining his life by being so perfect and beautiful, making him love her so much that he can do is think of her... Then he has the prophecied /grand mal/ and collapses at Yumi's feet. Something that I am sure will have Sissi and the other girls gossiping until the world freezes over.
A nice POV piece. I can see poor, internalised, obsessive Ulrich writing this, you know. I can tell that you put a lot of yourself into this effort.
BenRG's Rating: 7/10 |
 samuraigurl1213 2008-07-23 . chapter 1Oh, this was so good, I don't know where to begin. I feel myself growing addicted to your fics. |
 SnowPrincessMossy 2008-07-23 . chapter 1Great job! I love it. It's very descriptive and yea =] |
 audi katia 2008-07-23 . chapter 1This is so beautiful. The passion and description behind his words and actions brought tears to my eyes. Just... beautiful. |
 PeaceToThePeople 2008-07-23 . chapter 1oh my gosh.
that was beautiful and poetic!
it has to be one of the better one-shots i have ever read!
and now i really want to take a walk at one am. :) |
 AeltJerFan 2008-07-23 . chapter 1 Not bad. I know how poor Ulric feels, well...to a degree. I look foward to seeing more from you in the future. Till then Ja Ne!
P.S. Don't forget your other stories! |
 Railen 2008-07-23 . chapter 1Exciting and special. In that way that it makes you nearly cry, y'know? Which means you wrote it great. |
 trixter 93 2008-07-23 . chapter 1aw, how... poetic, and descriptive and meaningful, yeah it's just great, if i could rate i'd rate this 5/5
this is wonderful mas a one-shot, needs no more explanation. |
 Tourmaline91 2008-07-23 . chapter 1I absolutely adored this one-shot. Ah, it was so beautiful and poetic.
It's the perfect fix for a reader still awake past midnight.
Yes, though it seems (just a little) that someone probably put something in one of the cups of coffee Ulrich had previous to his one a.m. "adventure". |