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Chloee484 2008-08-19 ch 7,	abuseI KNEW IT! I KNEW IT! AH! i knew it was going to Oliver for the entire time! how could it not be? Yay! I was right! :DD
NaleyFan4Ever 2008-08-12 ch 8,	abuseThis story is awesome. I do love the Oliver/Lilly pairing. I kinda want to see a Nilly.
Randomly smuRfy 2008-08-07 ch 8,	abuse...I just came across this story, and I have to say, that was... a m a z i n g! You have no idea how much I love this story. Not only was it a great Loliver, well-written and all, but you turned me on to music that I never knew about. If you want a chapter-by-chapter review, I'll say: Prologue: I loved the way you described Lilly's dress. Chapter One: I like how you described "Kor". How charming and debonair he seemed. Plus, you provided me with the name of a singer that I hadn't heard in years! Chapter Two: You made me fall in love with James Morrison's "You Give Me Something". Chapter Three: Whoa. That was an intense chapter. The dancing, the song, the sexiness. lol. Chapter Four: The reaction that "Kor's" friends had to Lilly was priceless. :D And how "Kor" was so relaxed. Tie off, shirt partially unbuttoned, and all that jazz. Plus, the muscles...ah, those muscles...heehee. Chapter Five: That chapter almost made me cry. The song was so sad combined with the events. "Kor's" nervousness was lovely. Chapter Six: By far, my favorite chapter. The part where Lilly hit the DJ in the head with a pretzel had me laughing so hard, I was in tears. Seriously. Plus, I liked the auctioning part where Oliver paid the DJ, then paid the other bidder to shut up. Plus, the lyrics to the song fit so perfectly. I tried my best to read the story in pace with the song rather than skip ahead like I really wanted to. Oh, and the hair touch move. Ahahah, loved that! Sad, that Lilly reacted like she did, though. But I liked how similar Miley and Jackson are. Both having suggested pizza and a movie. Epilogue: My favorite part, of course, was the kiss. But I really liked how you didn't make Oliver grovel for forgiveness, but made him angry at Lilly. Nice twist. Darn Mr. Stewart, though. Interrupting a perfectly good moment. All in all, beautiful story! :D
rythem513 2008-08-06 ch 8,	abuseim glad it was Olivefr. this was a very good story and clever especially the reference to sylvia scarlett.
Sweet.Little.Secret 2008-08-06 ch 8,	abuseJOE! JOE! JOE!1
AColdSky 2008-08-05 ch 8,	abuseGreat story! I've been busy for the past couple days. I had my heart set on Kor being Oliver. You should totally write more Loliver stories. XD
JustSayLove 2008-08-05 ch 8,	abuseWow, I love the ending! Very satisfying. I like the idea of Loliver on the TV show, but whenever I try to write it I screw it up... you did an awesome job with it though. As for your "special offer" I'd like to see a Loe... Joe and Lilly are really great together. Hope to see more soon. - x S.
IGotJonasFever 2008-08-05 ch 8,	abuseEven though I;m not a fan of Loliver (sorry) this was pretty good. About your offer, could you do with Joe and Lilly? Loe rocks!!
nazgurl92 2008-08-05 ch 8,	abuseAmazing ending!!
rayray2032 2008-08-05 ch 8,	abusegreat story! do you think you could make the mystery-man jackson? lackson is my favorite couple. you just dont see many lackson storys lately. thanks!
tashLOVE 2008-08-05 ch 7,	abuseyou sed it was going to be the jonas brother!you lied!! you got my hopes up!! thats the only reason i read this! i just get into hannah montana fanfics then you just break it. its a good story, and i will keep on reading it, but im just not going to be waiting every afternoon just to see if you've updated. sorry, love tashie :(
nazgurl92 2008-08-04 ch 7,	abuseOMG! I loved the end! AMazing! can't wait for the epilogue!
notyouraveragedancer 2008-08-04 ch 7,	abuseOMG!!tht is definitely a shock!but stil okay wit me
iluvyoumorethancupcakes. 2008-08-04 ch 7,	abuseWOOT GO OLLIE! I was expecting a JonBro, most likely Joe, but I still love Loliver(: This story's SO awesome! I can't wait for the epilogue!
Le T.C. 2008-08-04 ch 7,	abuseAH! I knew it. :) it saddens me, though that everyone thought it would be a guest star that was on HM for one episode. -__- love it. I knew it would be Oliver!

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