...if Genesis goes through the typical CC events, that hydrocortisone is gonna ** with him pretty bad, I think; if he's taking it over an extended period of time (i.e., when Zack and Cloud are with Hojo), it'll cause bone deficiency, issues with the brain, problems with skin and muscle, and a cluster** of other issues that would likewise cause issues. Especially in someone who's fighting to stay alive as it is. That could be interesting to see!

Anyway.

I love the way you switch the perspective, giving a feel for most of the characters rather than just a few. It really puts things in balance, I think. Gives a very nice effect.

I'm so glad that this is being updated again.
The emotional intensity of this fic runs so high. I love it. My favorite part was probably seeing Genesis react to the copies.

I noticed some grammar/spelling/left-out words sorts of issues in this chapter, but they didn't detract from the intensity or make it confusing. It just seemed like you were in a hurry.

I really like this fic because it stretches my mind. Keep up the great work. I'll be waiting on the edge of my seat for another update.

This is really interesting. You write the characters well - Hollander actually seems 3 dimensional here, other than "I am a scientist who isn't Hojo,. thus I am evil!" vibe that he seemed to have in Crisis Core.

Enjoy your writing and update when you can,

-timydamonkey

Wow. When I played Crisis Core, I was totally disgusted by Hollander, but this fic makes him interesting.
I really like the way you write about Shinra politics.

your style is completely captivating, and you have kept them so completely in character! Kudos for that if nothing else, and there certainly is an 'else!' I simply love this so very much.

Wow. This has been a very interesting fic so far. I can't wait to read more. Nice job taking the details from the Ultimania and weaving them together into something cohesive.

This is it. This is the Genesis x Angeal fic I've been looking for. The characterization is spot-on.

I adore this pairing, and your writing. I agree with your earlier disclaimer, of course Angeal's twisted...who in that bunch isn't?

Anyway, I hope to read more from you soon.

My three favorite characters of all time, in a well-written, interesting story- I'm in heaven.

This fic is serious win. And the Angeal/Genesis- it is my yaoi OTP.

And your spelling and grammar were excellent; brownie points for you! Readability is always good.

Alerted!

~Royal