i think i like the alternet beter
good job, you nearly made me cry. i NEVER cry. ever. it was great!

I like both. I like when they keep her, but I also like when they just take her home. Hm. They're both good, let's go with that.

I liked this version better

I'm leaning more towards the second ending, not necessarily because it's the ending I would have preferred, but because it's more realistic, and seems much more thought out before being written.

Im confused.
At the end of the first chapter you said that they kept the baby and named her Nara Hope. And in the second chapter you said that she was adopted.
I think that you might of forgot your story line slightly.
Any way it was good to read anyhow.
Would like another story from you soon.

OMG i luv! :D

Next chapter! We want next chapter :D