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.insane.lil.piratess. 2008-10-16 ch 17,	abuseYa know, I was beginning to think you'd NEVER update! But YAY! YOU DID!! Yay for Mercedes having a history with 'Greythorne'! Tehehe! I love that name! This is interesting! Now I must get off my butt and play Pirates online! I wish I was called Mercedes... and from now on... I am! ~Robyn-- sorry, Mercedes! XD
XxSupernatural.lovexX 2008-10-15 ch 13,	abuseDude that was freaking awesome! sorry i haven't reviewed in a long time I just got distracted for a couple of tiny eensy weensy little wittle months heh heh. anyway I like the mermaids kinda cool I love underwater mythical creatures! it's cool to see your version of how Jack and Gibbs became buddies!
XxSupernatural.lovexX 2008-08-16 ch 12,	abuse“You smell funny!” lol so do YOU Jack. I liked that Teague kept slapping JAck it was funny that was sad about his brother tear poor ole Teague sniffle they lived such a hard knock life. Great chapter!
XxSupernatural.lovexX 2008-08-16 ch 11,	abuseoh YAAY Ana-Maria i love her, it always made me sort mad that she wasn't in the seconde or third I think thats becuase something about Elizabeth being the only pirate women and blah blah blah hehe :) Poor Bootstrap serves him right for crossing JAck. Loved it!
XxSupernatural.lovexX 2008-08-16 ch 10,	abuselol why the hell did Barbie do that to poor ole Ragetti. The poor thing 9_9 “I say it’s a grand idea, mate, only, what say you we torture ‘im first, then kill ‘is crew, then punch ol’ Bootstrap in the face –” I luaghed ot loud at that point lol he ran into a tree? typical jackie
XxSupernatural.lovexX 2008-08-16 ch 9,	abuseOkay I love this line “I will find out someday,” said Jack. “Now…I can on’y say bits ‘n’ pieces of it. I was fifteen, I think. Yeah, tha’ was it. I worked for this little idgit named Cutler Beckett. ‘E was a short, short devil, an’ by devil I don’t mean frisky lover, ‘cause tha’ woul’ be jus’ nasty, just thinkin’ of the feelin’ I ain’ feelin’, and wha’ I think on’y a blin’ woman migh’ be feelin’, ‘cause I’m sure ‘is own mummy didn’ like ‘im, bu’ jus’ the same, by devil, I mean little freak.” that was just awesome! i love it when he's all drunk and he starts to ramble. Great job with this chapter with the whole thing about Nassau Port. :)
XxSupernatural.lovexX 2008-08-16 ch 8,	abuseaw cute little parrot! i am glad to say that Tia was very in character I just love this story. Jack acts all selfish again but we can't help but love him.
.insane.lil.piratess. 2008-08-15 ch 16,	abuseYAY!! WOOT FOR UPDATES! Hm... very intresting!! Like the Will and Elizabeth bit! And I can't wait for more!! Oh, btw, I was on Pirates online the other day and Will was like "Oh, your Jack's friend." How would he know Jack if the story took place before COTBP?? And Elizabeth too! Confusing :/ LOL! But anyways, I can't wait until Jolly Roger turns up!! Hehe! I was telling my 4 year old cousin about him the other day and she got all freaked out and locked the front door!! Ooh and one more thing! You know the bit where you have to get the final warrent for Carver? Where's this 'Theives Den' place? Coz no-one payed attention to me when I asked them!! Sorry, I'm kinda just talking jiberish now! GREAT chapter! Cant wait for more! ~Robyn
.insane.lil.piratess. 2008-08-08 ch 15,	abuseYAY!! More Mercy! :] The furthest I've got on Pirates online is... uh, I think it's when Will teaches you to fight. Yeah, that's it! So, Mercedes is like the character you play... AWESOME! I can't WAIT for the next chapter! leaps up and down like a maniac Ah, so Raja is Leech... nice work! Can't wait for more!! ~Robyyn!
.insane.lil.piratess. 2008-08-06 ch 14,	abuseHI! Been a while, eh? :) I've been in france where there is no internet conection and everything is writen in french... Movving onwards... I LOVE YOUR STORY! OMG, OMG, OMG! It's the BESTEST EVER! And i love Pirates Online!! Although my damn computer has a problem with it for some reason... And I love Anna-Maria!! I was wondering if you'd put her in here!! There's so much to say!! But my head hurts! But THANK YOU FOR BRINGING THIS STORY INTO MY LIFE! ~Robyn
XxSupernatural.lovexX 2008-07-31 ch 5,	abuseno! the The Wicked Wench can't be gone! pouts oh well it's going to be the black pearl soon anyway. hehe Beckett did a little dance I like that Jack called him a little eunuch! HILARIOUS! I'm going to go read chapter 6 now...:)
XxSupernatural.lovexX 2008-07-31 ch 4,	abuseI think it's cute that Teague speaks how Jack speaks now...well you know what I mean. the ending was perfect lets see what sorts of things will happen with beckett
XxSupernatural.lovexX 2008-07-31 ch 3,	abuseaw poor jack his mommy sniffs died! haha how could he not know they were jewels! Riding a horse with no saddle is dangerous he could have lost his manly asset. hehe ;) Great chapter!
Bainpeth 2008-07-30 ch 1,	abuseYou wrote asking to be a part of my "Community," and I'm afraid I don't know what that means. You can email me at
Liz 2008-07-30 ch 10, anon.	abuseI woulda posted earlier but I didn't know you accepted anonymous comments! N.E.ways... I love it so far! You really bring out the chars more than other fics i've read. really, very good work! i also loved how u wrote barbossa in, he's really just like in the movie, seriously mad! wicked job, can't wait for more!

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