Ah, that was nice.

Funny, and well, if he wants a quiet and long life, he's definitely in the wrong profession :)

Nicely written, good work.

This was really good, I especially liked the chainsaw-weilding assassin who lacked 20-20 vision...

...and the "grave error in choosing his profession".

This was hilarious. Great job!

Maybe he did choose the wrong profession. Who knows? Only time will tell. I just hope Hayate stays alive until that time comes...

Bwahahahaha! I was cracking when read the end of this fic. Thx for the good laugh. )

Agreed with the fellow above me. Look forward to seeing more.

Good luck.

Its about time someone to the time to make a serious story in the Hayate the Combat Butler section. I'm happy to see that and look forward to the next chapter...