this is...fantastic...
i am not kidding, this is just...AMAZING! and i can actually find the truth in there. This is just something that is automatically in my favorites!

Deconstruction and repair of a fan preferred couple. *claps*

this is a seriously good one-shot I had tears in my eyes when I read the end. But while the ending is good I just don't think it fits so I was wondering I could create a story from it, I wouldn't really steal anything just the feelings of what each character thinks of Naruhina and make it in to something a little bit more.

So I am basically asking if I could create a multi-chapter story out of this one because it's just soooooo good. I understand if you say no of course since it's your story :)

*Cries Hysterically and claps hand frantically* Omg such a sweet yet sad story! Lol, the Dakura part really ticked me off.! T.T It'd be so cool if this was a long-shot . Amazing stoory!

-Frosty

I like this fic but it could've been better if you placed line breaks between each character's point of view because it could've made it more contrasting which I believe was the purpose of their existence.

Awww. This is so cute! I think Sakura's a little bit over confident of their relationship in this though...Oh well! Great nonetheless!8D

Awesome. What a great relationship fic :D

this was brilliant

nicely written and increased my hatred towards Sakura, something I didn't think was possible.

well done

That was beautiful!

Oh, wow... Anit NaruHina much? Everyone's so mean to them! (Well . . . except Sakura.) But I can understand their reasons... But still, I feel bad for Hinata. And what does Naruto think of this?

I like that you explored the flip side of the Naruto/Hinata relationship. In reality, they'd have a difficult go of it. No easy relationship for them. Despite this, they could work. It's nice to see a distinction between happily ever after and reality that is still hopeful.

love this! I like how you tell each perspectives in here. I wonder what Kiba or Shino would think about Naruto and Hinata's relationship... will they be supportive like Neji or like Sasuke instead...?

This is angsty yet uplifting at the same time ( I commend you for pulling that off). Interesting views on the different relationships Naruto has with people.

Absolutely loved it. 5/5

And I usually dislike Naru/Hina too.

Very well done. Very true to canon. Awesome.