|Reviews for Lines in the Sand|
| Kaya Kazaki 1/2/13 . chapter 1
i am not kidding, this is just...AMAZING! and i can actually find the truth in there. This is just something that is automatically in my favorites!
| BiblioMatsuri 11/10/12 . chapter 1
Deconstruction and repair of a fan preferred couple. *claps*
| Dis-Appearing Writer 10/24/12 . chapter 1
this is a seriously good one-shot I had tears in my eyes when I read the end. But while the ending is good I just don't think it fits so I was wondering I could create a story from it, I wouldn't really steal anything just the feelings of what each character thinks of Naruhina and make it in to something a little bit more.
So I am basically asking if I could create a multi-chapter story out of this one because it's just soooooo good. I understand if you say no of course since it's your story :)
| FrostyNight98 8/16/12 . chapter 1
*Cries Hysterically and claps hand frantically* Omg such a sweet yet sad story! Lol, the Dakura part really ticked me off.! T.T It'd be so cool if this was a long-shot . Amazing stoory!
| site error 5/20/12 . chapter 1
I like this fic but it could've been better if you placed line breaks between each character's point of view because it could've made it more contrasting which I believe was the purpose of their existence.
| Annibellee 10/30/11 . chapter 1
Awww. This is so cute! I think Sakura's a little bit over confident of their relationship in this though...Oh well! Great nonetheless!8D
| fAteD lOvE 9/1/11 . chapter 1
Awesome. What a great relationship fic :D
| X59 3/3/11 . chapter 1
this was brilliant
| Nemrut 9/19/10 . chapter 1
nicely written and increased my hatred towards Sakura, something I didn't think was possible.
| Payce D. Elui 8/28/10 . chapter 1
That was beautiful!
| mistressinwaiting 7/1/10 . chapter 1
Oh, wow... Anit NaruHina much? Everyone's so mean to them! (Well . . . except Sakura.) But I can understand their reasons... But still, I feel bad for Hinata. And what does Naruto think of this?
| Amrun 6/5/10 . chapter 1
I like that you explored the flip side of the Naruto/Hinata relationship. In reality, they'd have a difficult go of it. No easy relationship for them. Despite this, they could work. It's nice to see a distinction between happily ever after and reality that is still hopeful.
| Sapphire09 5/21/10 . chapter 1
love this! I like how you tell each perspectives in here. I wonder what Kiba or Shino would think about Naruto and Hinata's relationship... will they be supportive like Neji or like Sasuke instead...?
| midnightwaters 4/3/09 . chapter 1
This is angsty yet uplifting at the same time ( I commend you for pulling that off). Interesting views on the different relationships Naruto has with people.
| Logrus Mage 1/30/09 . chapter 1
Absolutely loved it. 5/5
And I usually dislike Naru/Hina too.
Very well done. Very true to canon. Awesome.