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| hakatri 2008-07-27 ch 1,  | abuseOkay I'm a bit late in reviewing, but I hope you'll forgive me :) Berg'inyon is just too cute in this one. Are yo going to write some kind of "seduction-scene" where he actively tries to get Jarlaxle into bed? I think that could very well be hilarious, especially if you two are doing the writing *g* I already had lots of fun with this one. And the grumpy Triel was great too. gretz hakatri |
| chair-chan 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHAHAHAHA! Wow, that was great! Haha I love how Jarlaxle is so confused about why Berg'inyon wants to sleep with him and how the younger Baenre doesn't get why Jarlaxle just wants to be "friends." Hahaha the bit about "hormonal fighters" was great, lol. I just love this whole composition, it was very light and fun! But shouldn't you be working on The Ambiguity of trust and Kindred Spirits, young lady? lol, just kidding. But I am eagerly awaiting updates for those two as well. haha wow well this story makes me glad I added you to my author alerts list, as well as the two mentioned above. :) What can I say? Just keep up the good work!(You too, Chi!) |