Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Innocence - Page 1 of 2
Extrani
2009-10-30 . chapter 1
Bravo! Wonderful in Katara's Point of View! Wonderful!
karina
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
that was awesome!!
i loved it
u r a great Avatar writer- and i loved the story
long live Avatar- sorry i always wanted to say that

:)
Unknown
2009-01-10 . chapter 1
this is the best story ive read today, you are an excellent writer and i love KATAANG!
Dionysus101
2008-12-02 . chapter 1
Good job. Your Katara POV really hit the spot (pun, sorry...)
imotel
2008-09-20 . chapter 1
that was very well written, one question though, y didn't you split it up into chapters
Bkipper
2008-08-17 . chapter 1
Oh my god... that was incredibly sweet! I've read quite a few character POV's but this is perfectly in character! I loved the ending. And not just the Gaang's reation... nice job.
LadyBaSingSe
2008-08-05 . chapter 1
This is beautiful. I adore it and I love the little quotes before each section and at the end of the last. I particularly love the ending. So cute!

Thank you, for this. I really needed this today.

I'm really going to miss Avatar...

~Katara
SapphireDesire
2008-07-30 . chapter 1
I loved it!! This was soo awesome!

Oh, on IMDb, it still shows Avatar as 2005-?

Maybe something more to come? (She said hopefully)

Sapphire
Anna
2008-07-25 . chapter 1
I LOVED your interperetation of this, it was such a pleasure to read this ^^

But...I think I cried when you posted this

February 21, 2005-July 19, 2008

D:! It looks like our show died, our poor, poor little Avatar...taken from us so soon...O' course, Bryke wanted it this way...so yeah xD But still :(
Nasecoeur42
2008-07-24 . chapter 1
This was an adorably cute story. Thank you very much for writing it.
Dafoose
2008-07-24 . chapter 1
Nice. I love how you explained the scenes in between. Definetely something to read after the finale. :D
Aangsfan
2008-07-24 . chapter 1
Aaw! So cute!
Trevor
2008-07-24 . chapter 1
I felt a little empty after the finale ended. It was as if I had lost a part of myself. Your take on the finale, and particularly on what Avatar has taught you (the italics), helped me. And for that I thank you. Excellent job.
Kichigai Hi
2008-07-23 . chapter 1
Oh... this just makes me want to cry with happiness XD! It was truly beautiful; the descriptions gorgeous and fully tying into the theme of love, purity, and innocence. It really is an awe-inspiring tribute to this wonderful show which really has taught me much too. It encompasses one with worry, love, and finally, unadultered happiness... There is just so much effort in this. Really, the feelings it inspires... are perfect. :)

Great job!
Alastor Vega
2008-07-23 . chapter 1
Your descriptive writing was very perfect.And the italic quotes were absulutley excellent. They were my favorite part. Awesome job.
Return to Top