 sangel307 2009-09-12 . chapter 1I just wanted to warn you that another author is copying your story. Unless you are writing together her pen name is MJWright. I reported her for having a duplicate, but I would check out, make sure, and contact someone to get it down. It is sad someone would resort to doing that. I hope she will take it down. |
 AshCrash44 2009-03-16 . chapter 7PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE TELL ME YOU DIDN'T ABANDON THIS STORY!? D:
I read the story before this one and then as I am reading the last chapter I notice when you last updated.
It is a great story and I love it.
Update soon please
:D |
 angelpinkgal 2009-02-13 . chapter 2Great story |
 Georgie Lutz 2008-12-28 . chapter 7What i think would be good, seeing as though she's the last of edwards family line up, i think she should have a kid with Reilly or someone nice. that way the Mason line will carry on.
Also, why did Reilly's eyes go a darker shade, that doesn't happen in real life, does it?
I want to know more about Bellas powers, she has two right? It said it in the prequel, and she can turn invisible and ... What is the other one? |
 its not you its me 2008-11-27 . chapter 7ok so i read the first story and loved it and i read this one and loved it to
so you need to update soon because its amazing |
 starbright37 2008-11-11 . chapter 7ep! they're going to the dance together. love it! cant wait to read more. please update soon. |
 beccarina 2008-11-08 . chapter 7awesome chappy! keep up the good work! |
 A is for Angel 2008-11-08 . chapter 7awesome
cant wait for more |
 zropin 2008-11-04 . chapter 6fun fun fun i have this feeling tht reilly is jacobs son or something wierd like that. it would totally tie into the romeo and juliet topic |
 beccarina 2008-11-03 . chapter 6I will love this story no matter what direction you take! i love holly too... she is really cool |
 ella0minnow0pea 2008-11-02 . chapter 6Foil isn't that bad. What's worse is when they try to do polynomials that are too complicated to use foil on. Bleah. So very happy that there's a story not about Renesmee. She's starting to annoy me with how prolific her FF is. Gragh. But great job! You might want to put a little more non-dialogue description in there, just to make it a little clearer. But update soon! |
 You.Got.Food.In.My.Hair. 2008-11-02 . chapter 6i love it lol and im reviwing |
 A is for Angel 2008-11-02 . chapter 6awesome chapter |
 starbright37 2008-11-02 . chapter 6they are so cute together! cant wait for them to actually get together. and if that doesnt happen I will kill you. jk. loved it! cant wait to read the next chapter please update soon. |
 starbright37 2008-11-01 . chapter 5love it. cant wait to read the next chapter. please update soon. |