Aww, this was cute :) Shin was so in character, so great job! I felt that Hiruma was a little OOC, but then again, in order to move the plot in the direction you wanted, maybe he had to be :\ Ah well, great story!

ooh this is cute. my only problem is that Hiruma is WAY too nice and considerate here, even if Sena is sick.

Uwaa! Adorable! I'm getting to really like this pairing! Good job, there!

Aw, that's so cute! And the cameo appearance by Riku made me squeal too because there really aren't enough fics with Riku and Sena together, even if it is only platonic like here.

i freaking loved it! and there was evem hirusena! *bows* hótóni arigato! and please tell me that theres a next chaptear! i just love your story so much!

Why is this complete? It needs another chapter! Sena thanking Shin or something... Please make another chapther!

That was so cute. I enjoyed this story a great deal. I love Shin/Sena. I think they are the only viable yaoi couple in ES21 (main characters)but I find believable romance fics that keep them in character to be it extremely rare. I can't do it. Nevertheless, I think you did a great job.

swoon, swoon, swoon, I love this pairing. ShinSena is MAX LOVE!

Ah! Lovely fic! Please keep it up!

So sweet...! Luv it.

Simple but good .

aw, that was so cute!

Shin/Sena is so cute! It's cute how Riku went brotherly over Sena, but I wonder what would be his reactions if he knew the in-depth feelings of Shin's actions. Tis very cute, and I enjoyed this very much.

By the way, I noticed that in your dialogue you have: " Shin-san I can walk."

You don't need that extra space to divide the quotation mark at the start. This would be a better choice:

"Shin-san I can walk."

And in the beginning where you have Kobayakawa, Sena was sick. You could just have it as Kobayakawa Sena as it's in Japan and last names do essentially come first.

Lin

Aw, cute story! I think you did a great job. You should write more Shin/Sena stories! There aren't nearly enough. _

Kawaii!

Aw, that was really sweet. I love concerned!Shin so much and I see from your profile that you're going to be doing another Shin/Sena, my hero!

Anyways, I just got back and chapter 56 should be up in a couple of hours, I hope you'll like it.