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| Hero.Of.The.Hazard 2008-08-17 ch 1, | abuseSweet! Finish? |
| RockBane 2008-08-04 ch 1, | abuseFreaky idea, but not as freaky as this one story plot I thought up not too long ago where I had Takato get transformed into a BlackGuilmon. Funny thing is, I think I posted it the only two complete chapters on /. I called it Dangers of the Digital Hazard and I think this link: /index.php?topic=4558.msg63031#msg63031 will take you to said story... |
| Zulaq 2008-07-30 ch 1, | abuseThis story seems to have a lot of potential. I can't wait to see where you go with this. Please update soon. |
| Voidwalker Zelt 2008-07-27 ch 1, | abuseMost of your stuff that I've read has left me speechless, (hence the lack of reviews from me) but this went so much farther than that and prompted me to review. In one word: Jaw-dropping. In several words: If it weren't for the reputation you have, I'd have disregarded this entirely. It's that crazy. But then, you are 'Crazy'Eight, right? Good luck with this. I patiently await more. |
| Frozen Triplets 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseI thought this was well done, you built Takato's character better then I've seen in awhile. Personally I think he would have freaked out a bit more, but I must say, I was annoyed when this ended. Also you're comment at the bottom started to make me think, Is Aniki Agumon in Takato's body and is experiencing Rika and Jeri, Henry... and Terriermon like that? Frozen Triplets Betamon X Gomamon Lucas |
| Blazing Chaos 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great idea and I'm sure you've got a lot of interesting things planned for it. Heh, why do I get the feeling there'll be a conflict of interests between TakaAgumon (okay, bad joke, so shoot me) and Marcus... Ugh, Ruin Mode will be...interesting, methinks. If the plot hasn't completely deviated by that point, of course. |
| Canis Black 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseThe potential awesomeness of this idea is just...mind-boggling. |
| Chaos Blademaster 2008-07-23 ch 1, | abuseThis certainly looks like it will be a pretty good story. And considering the fact that it is focusing on Takato and the Data Squad Agumon, only madness and hilarity can ensue. Considering your other works (both complete and otherwise), I can only assume that this will be just as good. |
| Pyro The Harbinger Of Chaos 2008-07-23 ch 1, | abuseWait...Changed places!? You mean Takatos(Season 3) going to be a Yukuza like nut? |
| Nolaquen265 2008-07-23 ch 1, | abuseHeh heh. Well, we'll see how this plays out and how people respond, eh? It's fun to experiment in the literary world... |