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| str4yk1rr3n 2008-08-26 ch 1, | abuseAw! So sweet and fluffy...and just a touch of angst...thought you were going to end it with a death scene and I got all teared up, and then my emotions got all confused when I was laughing again in the next scene. Nice job! |
| TheRavenclawNinja 2008-07-29 ch 1, | abuseFluff at its finest. So cute! Loved it. Nora xx |
| RosieB 2008-07-27 ch 1, | abuseYour stories are adorable. I would spend my entire night reading them except that I have exams in the morning. Boo. But I'm definitely returning to them, once possible. :) He really does get tongue-tied (or overly chatty!) at the worst possible times though, eh? Great job on this one! Ciao! |
| x-Kim0x 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant, great ending. Loved the companion's party. |
| spikemyangel 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseit was funny, sweet, and little bit sad. perfect ^_^ |
| Do As Eternity 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseI laughed pretty hard during the scene you wrote with Rose and the others sitting inside the cafe with the Doctor jumping about outside waving the psychic paper. Classic, that. Good reference back to Partners in Crime, one of my all-time favourite episodes now just 'cause of that scene with the Doctor and Donna. I'm sure the reason the Doctor doesn't say "I love you" that much is because no one seems to hear him when he says it, and he gets tired of being ignored. :D All joking aside, very cute story again. Made me smile. :) |
| NewDrWhoFan 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseThere are tears in these here eyes, thank you very much. :) |
| Lady Clark-Weasley of Books 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuse*giggles* oh i have just woken my sister up laughing! brilliant, just brilliant |
| OnlyinFiction 2008-07-23 ch 1, | abuselol that was brilliant argh gave me a bit of a heart attack with the last part though geeze making me think Rose is dead. Oh and i love Jack's last line. :) |
| Kathryn Shadow 2008-07-23 ch 1, | abuseYay for JE-ignoring! :D -glomps- |
| lyin' 2008-07-23 ch 1, | abuseoh, i enjoyed every inch of this AU; the dialogue was pitch-perfect and it was all really fabulous- especially enjoyed martha counting the blondes, their return to the planet where she promised forever, Donna's comments on the tea, and the wrenchingly wonderful line "You should've worn the brown one, wouldn't show so much, then." so very Rose! and every companion's so wonderfully in-character, your Donna particularly is stand-out but all their reactions seem just so good. and i'm glad you didn't really kill Rose :D wonderful work, thanks for the read! |