Just stumbled over you on someone else's favorite author list, and...I am thrilled to have done so.

This story is good. I mean, really, really, REALLY good. You haven't updated in months, though, and I sincerely hope this isn;t one of those fantastic fics that gets abandoned; it's WAY too good for that.

I'm really enjoying the political machinations going on, and I'm trying to figure out how - or IF - you're going to get Severus and Lily back together. I hope you do, but even if you don't...it should be one hell of a ride!

I'm putting it on my favorites list, and praying for an update. Hopefully sooner rather than later.

Nice work!

Cheers,
Adriann

I've come begging - this was one of my favorite fics - I'm hoping you might consider going back and continuing it. It's a wonderfully unique idea, with lots of little subplots of great interest. Please think about finishing it.

Hi!

I am really loving your story.
Do you have any plans to pick it up again?

Thank you!

CDB

omg! that was great! are you gonna make lily and sev end up together? i hope so! plz keep writing!

"Anyways" with an "s" is always ungrammatical, and should be used only by uneducated characters. I offer this in a spirit of helpfulness, because your writing is otherwise excellent.

With polyjuice on the loose, Narcissa and Severus need some method of idenifying when Sev is really Sev. I suggest she give him a small trinket that he can show her every time they meet. As far as that goes, Sev needs to be able to tell when Narcissa and Regulus are really themselves. With Lily he can always ask a question about their childhood.

Good story. I'm enjoying it.

I do hope you haven't abandoned this story. It's very good and, in my opinion, the best in your posted portfolio.

No, no don't stop!

wow, this is great so far. I got teary myself when I read about what Severus sees in the mirror...so sad!

Wow. I must say that this is like an actual story, a novel. It is so well written with so many different plots and focal points! I'm really loving it! Please oh please don't leave it hanging! It is FAR too good for that! This is good enough to sell in the store for money, not even joking!! It's addictive! I'm hooked! So please continue with it!!...I must say that this was an eventful chapter! I must also say that I would HATE to be in the Slytherin house! Sounds like a cut throat game of survival. You have to surround yourself with certain people in order to survive. I would HATE it! Narcissa handled herself pretty well though with the girls. I'm worried about her though. Could get touch in the future. I would definitely not like to be in her situation!!...Poor Lily! Snape's about to get a taste of his medicine, I can just feel it!! Can't say that he doesn't deserve it though! He hasn't even been thinking about Lily lately! He needs a reminder of who he's in LOVE with! That kiss sounded steamy though! Narcissa is gutsy! I'd be kinda mad if I were Snape. She was kind of flauting him in Rosier's face, a sure way to PISS him off! He's not one to play games with!! Well the plot is seriously thickening, a saw couldn't get through the theickness!! And so I'm gonna need you to update...SOON! pLEASE don't leave all of your readers hanging without any explanation of any kind!! Please don't leave ME hanging! Update!! Oh yeah and thanks for writing this amazing work of art!! Thanks and God bless!! UPDATE!! i'LL BE WATING!

This was a very enjoyable chapter!! I thoroughly enjoyed it! Narcissa was jealous!! I especially enjoyed that! Like I said, I like the thought of Narcissa falling for Severus because Severus is a good person, a caring person. He's not dark like Lucious. BUT Severus must always stay in love with Lily! She comes first!! I really like Avery! I hope that he turns out good as well! The fact that he's dating a half-blood Ravenclaw and he's proud of her, is very nice refreshing and nice to read about! I'm glad he stood up to Rosier as well!! I absolutely loved the friction between Lily and Severus in Potions! It was the next best thing from a conversation! It was well written and very entertaining. So much chemistry! Both potion experts! They were meant to be!! So LILY'S got the "good luck potion," Severus has the "love potion" and Rosier has the Polyjuice Potion...the plot thickens! I can't even guess what you have in store for us! Guess I'll just have to go on to the next chapter and see!!

Wow. What a truly amazing chapter. I knew you wouldn't let me down! We didn't get Lily's reaction to Snape's changed look but that is long forgotten compared to the many events that took place in this chapter!! Loved it! Absolutely LOVED it!! We got to see what Lily was feeling when she saw Narcissa and Malfoy! I absolutely loved it!! You wrote it so wonderfully! You could feel Lily's jealousy! It was most enjoyable to read!...No! Okay I love the idea of Narcissa being vulnerable to Snape and Snape caring for her but NO! He ignored Lily's green eyes! We DON'T ignore Lily's green eyes!! That was like a slap in the face!! He needs to get his priorities straight!! Poor Lily! With the way he's behaving right now, he won't be with her any time soon! He's acting as if she's just gonna wait on him, be there for him when he's ready. "When that happens it happens." I couldn't believe he said that?! What a nightmare?! Keep your eyes on the prize Snape! Your gonna lose her for good if you don't wisen up. Oh yeah and Rosier? You disgust me. What a pig! Murder Snape? We DON'T!...What an awesome masterpiece this chapter was! My favorite so far! I enjoyed it soo much!!...UPDATE!! NOW!...UPDATE! YEAH! What are we gonna do? UPDATE! When we gonna do it? NOW! Yay! Go, fight, win!

Sadly I have to admit (I hate to admit) that I was actually disappointed about this chapter. Don't get me wrong. I LOVED the things that happened during it but I was really let down on one HUGE expectation. I was disappointed that we didn't get to experience Lily's initial feelings when she first saw the changed Severus. We didn't get to experience that. Assuming that he faced his fear in front of the whole class, Lily had to have seen him, but we didn't get to experience her surprise or what she felt. :( I was really hoping for that. I'm not gonna totally discount you let though. You are obviously a very talented writer so I'm hoping that maybe you just held off until the next chapter. Maybe we'll be able to experience what Lily was feeling in the next chapter. Hopefully! But other than that disappointment I enjoyed Narcissa's fear. It made me happy because it gave me hope, maybe she will turn out good in this fic. After all her fear was Lucious being furious with her for being a "blood-traitor!" Hopefully! I was really saddened by Lily's fear! Lily can't be evil! Not even a possibility! I enjoyed Sirius's fear. It shows how much he really does value his realtionship with his brother. All in all good chapter. Hoping for certain emotions to be revealed in the next chapter! Here we go!!

"Harry Potter: the first generation." This could so be an epic novel written by JK herself! I'm really loving it!! Like I said in the beginning I like Narcissa and Severus and I wouldn't mind Narcissa falling for him...NARCISSA falling for HIM, not him falling for her! He must always remember Lily! Always love Lily, but I wouldn't mind him caring for Narcissa but that's all, he's Lily's!! She didn't even NOTICE him!! Well she noticed him but I wanted her to recognize him!! Oh well! I'm sure she will in the next chapter!! I really enjoyed reading people's reactions to seeing the "new and improved" Snape. It was very nice to read. I also liked reading about Narcissa and Snape showcasing their "relationship." Yes Narcissa, it will be easy for you to act the part because you are going to start falling for him! (smiles slyly, imitating Narcissa) On to the next chappie! Oh yeah, don't forget to UPDATE!! UPDATE!

This was great! Yay!! He finally used the hair potion and by the sounds of it he looks GOOD! Awesome!! I can't wait for Lily to see him!! He really is changing already, he probably doesn't even notice it but he's befriended a muggle, something he would've NEVER done in the past! He helped Lupin! He's really turning things around already! He's buffed up, got an awesome smile, and great hair! I'm excited for his return to school!...Now some Lily/Severus time? Please?! They're back in school now! They haven't seen or spoken to each other ALL SUMMER!! Enough is enough!! Please let them talk! Oh yeah and update!! I'm getting close to chapter 16!!...Okay not really but you get the point, please UPDATE!! :)

Another awesome chapter but my gosh, c'mon!! Severus and Lily!! Please!! I need them to interact!! I want to read some Lily/Severus stuff!!...I'm really glad that Severus is hanging out with his father though!! That is such a wonderful thing!! I'm loving their interactions! Maybe the broken family can be mended...I hope!! Love the fact that Snape is gettin rich!! He's gettin paid well and gettin buff!! Can't wait to see the outcome of it all!!