I do hope you haven't abandoned this story. It's very good and, in my opinion, the best in your posted portfolio.

No, no don't stop!

wow, this is great so far. I got teary myself when I read about what Severus sees in the mirror...so sad!

Wow. I must say that this is like an actual story, a novel. It is so well written with so many different plots and focal points! I'm really loving it! Please oh please don't leave it hanging! It is FAR too good for that! This is good enough to sell in the store for money, not even joking!! It's addictive! I'm hooked! So please continue with it!!...I must say that this was an eventful chapter! I must also say that I would HATE to be in the Slytherin house! Sounds like a cut throat game of survival. You have to surround yourself with certain people in order to survive. I would HATE it! Narcissa handled herself pretty well though with the girls. I'm worried about her though. Could get touch in the future. I would definitely not like to be in her situation!!...Poor Lily! Snape's about to get a taste of his medicine, I can just feel it!! Can't say that he doesn't deserve it though! He hasn't even been thinking about Lily lately! He needs a reminder of who he's in LOVE with! That kiss sounded steamy though! Narcissa is gutsy! I'd be kinda mad if I were Snape. She was kind of flauting him in Rosier's face, a sure way to PISS him off! He's not one to play games with!! Well the plot is seriously thickening, a saw couldn't get through the theickness!! And so I'm gonna need you to update...SOON! pLEASE don't leave all of your readers hanging without any explanation of any kind!! Please don't leave ME hanging! Update!! Oh yeah and thanks for writing this amazing work of art!! Thanks and God bless!! UPDATE!! i'LL BE WATING!

This was a very enjoyable chapter!! I thoroughly enjoyed it! Narcissa was jealous!! I especially enjoyed that! Like I said, I like the thought of Narcissa falling for Severus because Severus is a good person, a caring person. He's not dark like Lucious. BUT Severus must always stay in love with Lily! She comes first!! I really like Avery! I hope that he turns out good as well! The fact that he's dating a half-blood Ravenclaw and he's proud of her, is very nice refreshing and nice to read about! I'm glad he stood up to Rosier as well!! I absolutely loved the friction between Lily and Severus in Potions! It was the next best thing from a conversation! It was well written and very entertaining. So much chemistry! Both potion experts! They were meant to be!! So LILY'S got the "good luck potion," Severus has the "love potion" and Rosier has the Polyjuice Potion...the plot thickens! I can't even guess what you have in store for us! Guess I'll just have to go on to the next chapter and see!!

Wow. What a truly amazing chapter. I knew you wouldn't let me down! We didn't get Lily's reaction to Snape's changed look but that is long forgotten compared to the many events that took place in this chapter!! Loved it! Absolutely LOVED it!! We got to see what Lily was feeling when she saw Narcissa and Malfoy! I absolutely loved it!! You wrote it so wonderfully! You could feel Lily's jealousy! It was most enjoyable to read!...No! Okay I love the idea of Narcissa being vulnerable to Snape and Snape caring for her but NO! He ignored Lily's green eyes! We DON'T ignore Lily's green eyes!! That was like a slap in the face!! He needs to get his priorities straight!! Poor Lily! With the way he's behaving right now, he won't be with her any time soon! He's acting as if she's just gonna wait on him, be there for him when he's ready. "When that happens it happens." I couldn't believe he said that?! What a nightmare?! Keep your eyes on the prize Snape! Your gonna lose her for good if you don't wisen up. Oh yeah and Rosier? You disgust me. What a pig! Murder Snape? We DON'T!...What an awesome masterpiece this chapter was! My favorite so far! I enjoyed it soo much!!...UPDATE!! NOW!...UPDATE! YEAH! What are we gonna do? UPDATE! When we gonna do it? NOW! Yay! Go, fight, win!

Sadly I have to admit (I hate to admit) that I was actually disappointed about this chapter. Don't get me wrong. I LOVED the things that happened during it but I was really let down on one HUGE expectation. I was disappointed that we didn't get to experience Lily's initial feelings when she first saw the changed Severus. We didn't get to experience that. Assuming that he faced his fear in front of the whole class, Lily had to have seen him, but we didn't get to experience her surprise or what she felt. :( I was really hoping for that. I'm not gonna totally discount you let though. You are obviously a very talented writer so I'm hoping that maybe you just held off until the next chapter. Maybe we'll be able to experience what Lily was feeling in the next chapter. Hopefully! But other than that disappointment I enjoyed Narcissa's fear. It made me happy because it gave me hope, maybe she will turn out good in this fic. After all her fear was Lucious being furious with her for being a "blood-traitor!" Hopefully! I was really saddened by Lily's fear! Lily can't be evil! Not even a possibility! I enjoyed Sirius's fear. It shows how much he really does value his realtionship with his brother. All in all good chapter. Hoping for certain emotions to be revealed in the next chapter! Here we go!!

"Harry Potter: the first generation." This could so be an epic novel written by JK herself! I'm really loving it!! Like I said in the beginning I like Narcissa and Severus and I wouldn't mind Narcissa falling for him...NARCISSA falling for HIM, not him falling for her! He must always remember Lily! Always love Lily, but I wouldn't mind him caring for Narcissa but that's all, he's Lily's!! She didn't even NOTICE him!! Well she noticed him but I wanted her to recognize him!! Oh well! I'm sure she will in the next chapter!! I really enjoyed reading people's reactions to seeing the "new and improved" Snape. It was very nice to read. I also liked reading about Narcissa and Snape showcasing their "relationship." Yes Narcissa, it will be easy for you to act the part because you are going to start falling for him! (smiles slyly, imitating Narcissa) On to the next chappie! Oh yeah, don't forget to UPDATE!! UPDATE!

This was great! Yay!! He finally used the hair potion and by the sounds of it he looks GOOD! Awesome!! I can't wait for Lily to see him!! He really is changing already, he probably doesn't even notice it but he's befriended a muggle, something he would've NEVER done in the past! He helped Lupin! He's really turning things around already! He's buffed up, got an awesome smile, and great hair! I'm excited for his return to school!...Now some Lily/Severus time? Please?! They're back in school now! They haven't seen or spoken to each other ALL SUMMER!! Enough is enough!! Please let them talk! Oh yeah and update!! I'm getting close to chapter 16!!...Okay not really but you get the point, please UPDATE!! :)

Another awesome chapter but my gosh, c'mon!! Severus and Lily!! Please!! I need them to interact!! I want to read some Lily/Severus stuff!!...I'm really glad that Severus is hanging out with his father though!! That is such a wonderful thing!! I'm loving their interactions! Maybe the broken family can be mended...I hope!! Love the fact that Snape is gettin rich!! He's gettin paid well and gettin buff!! Can't wait to see the outcome of it all!!

This was a great chapter, however I feel that if I don't get to read at least a conversation between Lily and Severus, I will lose my mind! I am enjoying reading about Severus's transformation though. Yay! He's running and working out! It was funny to read about his running process and yay his father's helping out!! At least I hope he is...nothing would please me more than to see their friendship mended...well nothing besides Snape and Lily together!! :) I'm glad you didn't write too much about the job setting. You wrote just enough! I liked reading Snape and Roxanne's interaction. Wow. He's becoming quite the lady's man isn't he? Keep your eyes on the prize though Snape!! LILY!! LILY! oKAY Then? On to the next chapter!

Yay!! Another awesome chapter!! It's really sad that Severus has to live in such a violent and unstable household. No wonder he dislikes Muggles so much! The only one he knows is a complete butt!! I'm really excited for him to get his hair fixed up!! Can NOT wait!! I'm also excited that he's getting a job, but he NEEDS to remember who he's fighting for! He's fighting for Lily!! He likes Lily! He LOVES Lily!! Don't lose sight of the prize Severus!! And my gosh it's so sad to read how heartbroken Lily is! Gosh! It's enough to make ME want to cry!! I sure hope she cheers up soon. But it is nice to see how much she really does care for Snape. Gosh there love is so deep, niether one of them even realizes!! Can't wait to read more!! Please update!! By the time I get done with chapter 16 I will be expecting an update!! I mean it!...Or at least I'll be praying for one...Please update! The story's too good to leave hanging!! :) UPDATE!!

This one was not as long as the others have been but I guess because it had a specific event to depict. I really like Regulus! I hope that he and Severus do become close, and
Severus allows him to be his friend! I think Regulus has already started to do just that! I really hope to see some Severus/Lily action or at least a conversation! It's been so long!! And I'm scared because I don't want Lily to be hurt any more! She's already cried enough over Snape and I don't want to see it any more! I'm hoping that something will happen to keep her from being extremely hurt by Snape and Narcissa's fake relationship. I'd rather her even date Potter just to avoid her sadness, after all jealousy is such a more passionate and preferable emotion than sadness! I do like Narcissa and Severus's friendship though. I could see something happening between them where she starts to see him as more and vice versa. I wouldn't mind if she started to like him, but I don't want him to lose sight of Lily! Lily's the one for him!! Anyways, on to the next chapter!! :)

Oh my gosh seriously, your story is amazing!! Nothing short of amazing!! But I can't believe you haven't updated since April!! Please oh please don't abandon this story, it's obviously fantastic, I mean look at the number of reviews!! I'm on the 6th chapter now and I plan on leaving a review for the ones I read after this but honey please, you have to update!! It's amazing! Not to mention freakin addictive! Do you know where I am right now? I am in the computer lab of the University I go to, getting ready to read the 7th chapter!! I should be in class but my Professor was late for the 1st time!! You don't know how happy I was!! I was praying he'd cancel class so I could continue reading this amazingly brilliant story!! It's THAT addictive!! I freakin love your chapter lenghts!! Amazing!! Longest chapters I think I've ever read!! I really LOVE your depiction of characters!! You'd swear you were JK Rowling with your accurate characterization!! I have so much more to say but I'll leave it for the next review since I've already written so much that the fanfiction is doing that annoying thing with the page scroll! Please update though! God bless!!

great story going here, whenes the next chapter coming out??