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| buckit 2008-07-30 ch 7,  | abuseWOW! that was teriffic.it gave me goose bumps. i could see warrick saying that to all of them. you did a wonderfull job on this story thanks |
| jtbwriter 2008-07-30 ch 7, | abuseThat is amazing...thank you for a great "what if?"...and for being true to the real feelings of "our" team! Good work! |
| sarahalliwell 2008-07-30 ch 7, | abuseThat was a really great story... I liked how you got everyone's point of view, specially Warrick's. I am so dreading the season premiere lol.. Lovely work |
| butterflywhisper 2008-07-30 ch 7, | abuseOh, wow! I loved this whole story but this last chapter was especially touching. This one and Sara's were my faves. I have got to find that song. Thanks for a wonderful story. |
| Julz29 2008-07-29 ch 6, | abuseNicely done! You going to write Warrick's POV? Or the undersherif? |
| was spratlurid quimby 2008-07-29 ch 6, | abuseThat was a great chapter |
| jtbwriter 2008-07-29 ch 6, | abuseThat was good-you nailed the ambivalence and grief that Sara has about Warrick.. Thanks to being so right on about the feelings they all have..now what?:) |
| jtbwriter 2008-07-28 ch 5, | abuseThat was good-you did get Brass' thoughts just right and his POV was heartbreaking...and truthful! Thanks! Now what happens?:0 |
| was spratlurid quimby 2008-07-28 ch 5, | abuseGreat again |
| jtbwriter 2008-07-27 ch 4, | abuseThat was so sad..poor Greg's meanderings are such a reflection of what everyone else is feeling, only his are so raw! Thanks for being so true to the pov's! Now what?:0! |
| jtbwriter 2008-07-26 ch 3, | abuseSo sad...thanks for being so true to Catherine's feelings- and for the way Lindsay tries to comfort her! So good- more please?:) |
| Sara lover554 2008-07-25 ch 2, | abuseI'm glad you made it kind of happy in the end I can imagine Warrick haunting Gil from the grave About paperwork? Maybe :) Keep writing |
| jtbwriter 2008-07-25 ch 2, | abuseThank you for continuing this-heartwrenching as it is.. And I love Nick's POV...it makes such sense! Now what?:) |
| Sara lover554 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was SO sad (tear tear) PLS write another story :) |
| was spratlurid quimby 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseWow cthat was great |