Once again, you've portrayed the horrors of the future beautifully and tragically. I was getting shivers just from reading this. I really loved the dashes at the beginning of certain sentences, the imagery of Trunks coming home to Bulma, bloody and soaked, telling her of Gohan's death and how he was drowning in the despair and rage.

Great style ! Well done, purposely spining and confused I guess...

Powerfull last lines !

Keep up the writing.

Is this a one-shot or something you're planning to continue? Oh, and it's good, by the way. Hope you're continuing it. ^^