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BeMyDoll
2008-07-24 . chapter 1
I love it. I found some mistakes but... It's 11:35 in the morning, don't make me think XD ~ It's not WOW HOW MANYY MISTAKES; everything is understandable but I tell you this because maybe you'll want to correct them XD
The plot is good, and for once at all, Hora isn't cold and mean or otherwise, he's not silly XD ~ He uses to take one of these personalities, because they're use to be which suits better on him XD ~ Poor him, my best wishes to Hora *imagines that he reads this and he tries to kill me*

Well, obviously it doesn't finish there, does it? O.O because with this beginning, there's so much to do with the story!
*high-pitched shout* A

Will be waiting for more chapters ^_^
though Hora, more than leaving, should kick Kaya's ** n_n
or Juka's one, at least XD

AH... HORA (L)
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