This was very very very good! i really liked it also i simply love your writing style! ^_^ good job and i hope yuo keep writing it would be a waste for someone with such abilities to not write more! ^_^

Ooh, good ending! It's kind of a nice change of pace, seeing Nny get better :D

*sniff* I love that ending. What a good fanfic. AH! The whole Nny and Squee being brothers is so cute!

Aww, what a nice ending! It's really refreshing to see Johnny end up okay/normal as opposed to the usual stories where Johnny still has to deal with his figments and whatnot in the end. And the thing with Todd was so sweet.
:D
I'm glad Squee's okay.
Great story!
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Oh cool! I just reviewed for your last chapter and low and behold I see that another one is up! I'm happy.

I had not seen that coming! I wonder what Nny's going to do next and if Todd's going to be okay.

And we learn a little bit more about the shadow man!

This chapter didn't seem as good as your previous ones. The narrative was strange in places; as if you were really speaking to us rather than telling the story though the character's actions. Like this sentence: "Now that he thought about it what made Johnny so scary in the first place? I guess it was how he presented himself." That threw me through a loop, a little. As well, there were several places where there was 'their' where 'there' should be. Like the sentence: "Their would be no more reactions." and "Game because their are rules and their will be a clear winner or loser."

It was a good chapter for characterization though. We get a good feel for the shadow man's real nature and what he might possibly be. I get a vague feeling that he might be the wall monster.

Oh, and I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks that Nny is sheltering Squee!

so who is the shadow man?

This story is very interesting! You defiantly need to write more! :)

Oh no, poor little Squee!
I hope he'll be okay.

I'm really curious as to whom this shadow man is. I wonder if he's like one of the doughboys or if he's something more...

Anyway, very nice chapter; I really like your characterization of the doughboys.

This is very interesting and well written and definitely deserves more reviews. I hope you'll continue this some day.

oh god, poor squee O^O