Wonderfully chilling and an interesting take on how the Joker became... well himself. Perhaps you should read my version of the tale. Anyhow, excellently done. Not lacking too much in detail and written as through his eyes. Well done, but I thought something was missing... oh well, it doesn't really matter.

Sincerely,

Scelestus Interimo Nocta

Aw...no sequel :( i loved it!

this gives a more realistic view of why thejoker is who he is today. i though it very disturbing which inthe events that passed in this story makes a lot of sense. it surprised me that he accually seen bruce and didnt make a connection when they got older. to mw this was brilliant in a way of seeing that most of the time only the most tramatic eves can cause the mind to ultimatyl shut down in a way that can cause that person to be unable to function in the world as an adult. this is exatly what i wa looking for when i wanted to learn about the background or at least one of the stories for he joker.

*punches young Bruce in the face*

Stupid kid. xD

Very nice story, great job!

I like it, but you need a beta to clean it up a bit. But else, its really nice :D

It started really good... I mean really good...I could visualize...then somewhere around the end..you lost me...the ending definitely needs works...but the beginning is tight...i like that.

It's quite nice.

I liked most of it :D

Just in case you wanted to know,

In the 'Batman' movie that came out in 89, the Joker's name was Jack Napier.

Wow, just wow, that story was really well written. It's so chilling to think about how the Joker came to be.