really cute story

Goten should have stuck with the innocence that always had when was a kid :(

I think Gohan and Goten have a unique father, he is the best!

very sweet fic ;D

*sniff* that was so sweet! *blows nose*

What does that mean? The last two sentences? THat's a little odd. Are you using a metaphore or are youplanning a fic inthe future(since it's two years later probably already did it) that involves this? Wierd.

ANyway, I liked this. It was sweet.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. So sweet!

Ja ne!

*Pearlz*

Awwww! It was sooo sweet! - It was a great song fic! :3

Very kawaii! . Nice use of the song, too, I had never read a "song fic" before. And nice use of symbolism: stars...

I liked it a whole lot!

That was a very good story. It was really cute. Maybe you could've written more about Goku. *_* Perhaps you could write a sequel about Goten meeting Goku.

AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW THIS IS SO CUTE!

How sweet!

That was so sweet. I always wondered if Gohan and Goten had a little talk about Goku.

Awwwwness! That song works so perfectly it's heart stopping! You're really on a roll, DoC! So SWEET that my teeth ach! (that's a good things!)

That was a great story,keep writing!

awwww! that was soooooooooo cute! hehe, i like the song! . very... simple! still, it portrayed (oooh! a big word! .) the mood very well! (wow! is it me, or am i getting smarter? hehe) *blinks* hehe, my smartness passed! hehe, well, gotta go! byeth byeth!

Twinkle Twinkle Little Star...that's a great idea. Who else would have thought of it? It's so nice...