omg! cute!

love it.

so much.

so so much.

*dies*

-stripedpolkadots

This was good. I enjoyed the story and I think you had a good grasp of Gunther and Jane. Pepper and Smithy seemed a little out of character at the beginning: Smithy is hardly ever annoyed,and Pepper seemed too hysterical when she hardly makes a fuss. The only other thing is to watch your comma usage, because after names and things like 'oh' there should have been some. And, just because the speech patterns of this show are very unique, do not use hyphenated words in dialogue. Its a pain, but to people familiar with this 'verse, its super annoying.

Good job, althogher! I hope you come out with another fic soon.

KrisEleven~

What a wonderful story! Great job.

Oh, I love this! I love the introspection w/ both Jane and Gunther, and I love the slight awkwardness b/t them that made this so much more adorable. Great job!

Luv,
Miss Pookamonga ;-P

No second season? Evil people... And by the way, nicely written!

Yikes? It's time like those that make me want to go squee for no apparent or good reason at all. They're fun!

... He's in denial? And desperate? Yup, this points out to that. Is this a sort of sequel to Pinpoint?

aw, this story was so cute. i can't wait to read more gunther and jane fics from you!

Big bag of cookies!
XD

i love this.

so much.

SO SO MUCH.

pretty much... janexgunther ROCKS.

it rocks SO hard.

almost as much as you do.

no joke.

-jolie

Ah, the cute. :D

"Jane, I know what your thinking." You're? :P

"Her companion shook her head, “Too dangerous. Wait for Dragon.”" *cough* HIS head? XD

Lovely conclusion to a very sweet fic. Heart it. Looking forward to your next fics! ^^

Yes a great story finished and hope that they do continue they will continue if not at least there be great stories of the show in here =]

AWESOME!

That was cute! Write another!