|Reviews for Underground Pleasures|
| Zayide 1/20/13 . chapter 17
Its an awesome plot but I'm sad it hasn't developed in so long. In hopes that ur muse returns ans u reconsider continuing i am listing u in my alert list.
| Satan'sSpawn121212 9/28/11 . chapter 17
Love this story please keep writing and update soon
| sundance1989 4/29/11 . chapter 17
ohh please continue the story it is really good i gotta know what happens
| MrsCarlisleSnape 3/13/11 . chapter 17
Please update soon this is too good! x
| DarkJamAB 2/27/11 . chapter 17
Jareth is as arogant as ever i see. so... about Arty, is he going to be the loyal subject or is he going to be Jareth's competition? personaly that arogant ass, and i say that with love, does need someone to give him a run for his money )
| jessytemple 2/8/11 . chapter 17
i like Arty! don't like your Jareth very much.. and there was too little Jareth and Sarah interaction.. but i like the general idea of the fic.
| Good Work 12/9/10 . chapter 17
Poor Sarah. I hope she receives some help and imformation that she can use to make her escape to the aboveground. This knownledge should mean that neither King Jareth nor anyone would be able to get and keep her in the underground against her will.
At the some time, she can visit friends in the underground if she wants without being trapped in those magical realm(s).
Now where, oh where to find knowledge and help? So that she can leave him.
| MagickalMischief 10/7/10 . chapter 17
Great story! Can't wait to read more!
| Onileo 10/3/10 . chapter 17
Thank you so much for updating! And the intro of a cute elf is sure to stir up some interesting jealousy issues on Jareth's part, lol.
Keep up the great work, and I can't wait to read more!
| hazlgrnLizzy 9/28/10 . chapter 17
An interesting chapter!
| CandyCane460 7/20/10 . chapter 16
WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN? Omg hurry up with a new Chapter please!
| Pinfeathers 6/6/10 . chapter 16
Interesting story so far, waiting to see where you take it.
One small note, there are a couple of places where there's some word confusion, for instance, at one point you refer to Sarah as an "impostor" instead of an "intruder". Also, you keep alternately referring to Jareth's owl form as either a snowy owl or a barn owl. It's supposed to be a white barn owl, although a lot of people make that mistake...
Other than those picky details- Keep up the good work!
| lonely 27 5/9/10 . chapter 16
good..update sooner please
| FireShifter 3/29/10 . chapter 16
Oh, it's so good to see you writing again! Please update again real soon please! :D
| hazlgrnLizzy 3/29/10 . chapter 16
An enjoyable chapter, and looking forward to the next!