   Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 1/31/11 . chapter 10i love it! can't wait for more! |
| FelipeMarcusThomas 11/15/10 . chapter 10 A fascinating story that I just found, but which seems to be just about over. I hope you're able to update soon. |
| princess emma of narnia 11/5/10 . chapter 10 i loved it update asp |
| Serpent91 11/5/10 . chapter 10 Well done! |
| Serpent91 7/16/09 . chapter 9 Awesome! |
| Serpent91 8/10/08 . chapter 8 AWESOME! |
| Serpent91 8/9/08 . chapter 7 Love this! |
| Serpent91 8/6/08 . chapter 6 wow!
That I didn't expect.
Love this! |
| Serpent91 8/4/08 . chapter 4 I really dislike Peter's desicion. It takes way too many lives. I can still remember their faces when they were trapped in the movie. I believe I cried then.
Good story. I hope they can help the foolish professor. |
| Serpent91 7/25/08 . chapter 3 What is the proffessor going to do? oh. I smell trouble.
anyway.. cool story! and really cool start. |
| maddikinz940 7/24/08 . chapter 1 Wow I liked this update soon! |
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