Love the Story pleeas do more:)

i feel so bad for rose :(

this was written really well, i liked it :))

I think this was very well done, aside from a view easily fixable errors. The writing is strong.

That was incredible-the ending was intense! You are an excellent writer, can't wait to see this from Emmett's POV!

Oh WOW! This is an increadible beginning to what I am sure will be a fantastic story! I am very impressed with your writing style. And I like that you have chosen to write from Rosalie's POV. I feel that she is often hated more than she is liked. But, you just have to look beneath the surface to see why she is the way she is.

This is so sad! I really felt like Rosalie's experience was one of the very saddest parts of the Twilight books, and I've never read any fanfic dealing with it before. :(

However, sadness aside, I am really enjoying your writing and the emotions that you're tapping into here. Nice job with a painful subject.

Aww cute. I hope you continue.

This is great! You should do a sequel; have her tell Emmett. Please?

This is really great, you've done a nice job.

I liked this. I'm so interested in knowing and understanding Rosalie. Thanks for your insight :)

WOw! i love rosalie and im always annoyed when people bash her.

i loved your fic cause it showed a side of her she never allows us to see! and i truly believe emmet loves her.