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Reviews For: Pudge

Babycobweb
2008-08-20
ch 1,
abuseHaha, the ending was funny. (:
I enjoyed this.
AidenShore
2008-07-29
ch 1,
abuse:)

Short, simple, and cute.

Have you considered transitioning this from poetry to prose?
Tsukiaa
2008-07-24
ch 1,
abuseI fell off my chair,
far down to the ground,

One scrape
two scrapes
three scrapes, wow

four scrapes
five scrapes
six scrapes, ow.

Lol. But seriously, now you make me want to write a chubby fic 'cause I laughed so hard.
Miss-Frenchie
2008-07-24
ch 1,
abuseHey it's me. Don't worry about that flame. There's a reason it was anonymous!

Keep up the great work!
tvFANatic26
2008-07-24
ch 1,
abusehaha that was funny and cute. I love how it was a poem -- very original. And flamers suck! That first commenter is honestly pathetic -- this was a GREAT fic :)
crazy4oliver
2008-07-24
ch 1,
abuseBucket On The Head.
First off, I want to say people that post comments like the first one you recieved have no business acting like that.

It truly is sad how pathetic some people are.

This was cute, though I'm having the hardest time picturing Nathan Kress 'pudgy'.
Haha.

Keep up the good work.
I loved this, it's going on my favorite Stories list.

Ugh.
People.
Mariah
2008-07-24
ch 1, anon.
abusei really liked this :D its a really good concept on their relationship

ps: dont listen to flamers
they're stupid and dont know how to give constructive criticism
trust me haha i've had my fair share of flames
crono
2008-07-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseshort and sweet! don't listen to that jackass! let's see your story punkass punk!!
CarmenAmalia
2008-07-24
ch 1,
abuseGood old Sam. :D I like this story/poem thing a lot.
staterfs
2008-07-24
ch 1,
abuseThat was very interesting. kudos
usuck123
2008-07-24
ch 1, anon.
abusewtf this story is horrible!god i hope this is ur onley one
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