|Reviews for Broomsticks and The Wizards Gauntlet|
| Kitn 3/3/13 . chapter 18
I thought Persephone was a Black, and the black's were related to the Malfoy's? So does that make Persephone and Scorpius like distant cousins?
| Kitkat 1/6/13 . chapter 22
Are you done with the next broomsticks book? They are quite addicting.
| CecilieDK 8/9/12 . chapter 22
Just brilliant as all the previous installments.
I'm partial to the existential and relationship crisis Dramione had in the Broomsticks and the Big Apple.
I still think the modest amount of reviews is a crying shame, but please don't let that deter you from writing the Jillian/Albus Broomsticks and back (to Hogwarts) story.
Have a wonderful week and good luck with the writing - it is much appreciated
| Guest 8/3/12 . chapter 22
I wanna hear more about squoripious and his wife fighting off the wards of girls!
| ToBeOneWithWords1212 7/29/12 . chapter 22
It's been 4 years, ever gonna finish it?
| hotterpotter 12/13/11 . chapter 12
Hey there, I'm well into "The Wizard's Gauntlet" part of the Broomsticks series, and have read the preceding "Broomsticks" as well. Let me first say that your stories really take the "Dramione relationship" to new levels for me. Only two or three Authors I've read thus far have been able to really capture the essence of their lives together, and apart in some instances.
Your stories are well written, (not speaking of grammatical errors ;)...) have enough backstory without being boring or giving a lot of unnecessary information, your flow is superb, kind of reminds me of how daytime tv drama goes, you know "the stories" as they are commonly referred to.
You are one of the few who have inspired me to continue writing as I have several bits and pieces in the making, I have alot of trouble keeping it going, as I do get writers block, and am at a loss for where I want some of my stories to go. I am new to this so I really am at a loss sometimes, but enough about me.
I am completely in awe of your character development. You give Each character his or her own persona and really allow them to grow through the story you are telling.
It may seem silly, but I like reading how Draco puffs on a cig when he's anxious about something, I love how Hermione submits to her husband, though not in a subservient or slave like manner, given her fiesty and headstrong personality, esp. coming from Gryffindor. It's just that she recognizes that Man and Woman or rather Husband and Wife have roles to play, doesn't make either of them less or more than to the other. I wish people would get that in real life period, we'd have a lot less divorces and more passionate and honest relationships between people.
At first I thought it would be boring to read about their kids and the lives of those around them, but as I read the first chapter to "The Big Apple" I couldn't put it down, both their sons take on their dad's personality albeit in different ways, but I just love how they are so much like him, I appreciate the relationship that Hermione has with Draco's parents, although I would love to see a father/daughter moment between Lucius and Hermione, esp. since Her parents are not in the picture,(Please don't scold me as I haven't finished reading yet, so that may be in a future chapter.) I thought that's where you were going in a couple of different scenes, but it didn't play out that way. I can totally see Lucius embracing Hermione in a fatherly way and comforting her about something mildly trivial. Just a thought.
Anyway I've blabbed enough, and you know that I find your style phenomenal, I could see this as a continuing series. However I am well aware you have a life...lol.
Just a tidbit, I would love to read epilogues about Draco's and Hermione's life during her first second and third pregnancies, was she more bitchy, or calmer, hornier or had no taste for love making, etc. I don't know why this intrigues me so, but I absolutely love your very descriptive sex sessions between the two, as well as their normal everyday conversations, playful banter, heated arguments, disagreements and so on.
I love how Draco is very passionate and possessive with what's his, I love how they argue, and how Draco will call Hermione out with no reservations,(I loved the scene where she smelled cig smoke on his breath and they get into a heated argument and he asks her why shes such a bitch and then tells her to "F" off!) -CLASSIC... and how Hermione although a good wife, will let Draco know just how she feels about anything, If you hadn't noticed I am a huge Draco lover, and I love pairing Hermione and He together, I think that they clash so much, that they actually fit perfectly.
That is all :)
Keep going if it pleases you to do so, I will continue to read them all!
| Guest 10/13/11 . chapter 22
I absolutely love the broomsticks series I can't put my iPod down sometimes it's so good never expected the goldsmith bit :D
| miss kitty person 6/14/11 . chapter 1
When are u gonna post the next "book" in da series?
PS: LUUUUV IT!
| Random 4/24/11 . chapter 22
Aww, no next story? D:
| Little Miss Magic 12/26/10 . chapter 22
Oh my gosh, I can't wait for the next story!
I've just finished reading all of your "Broomsticks and..." fics, and I ADORE them, the best Dramione fics I've ever read I daresay!
Keep writing, you're amazing :o!
| boohoo 7/16/10 . chapter 22
Hi I came across the broomsticks series and I have to say its fantastic its a shame that the final Jillian and Albus storyline is not completed hope you do decide to complete them all it is wonderfully written especially Draco and Hermione they are fabulously and deliciiously great together
| jj 9/2/09 . chapter 22
woah. THAT WAS AWESOME! pure genius using little jillian! oh and btw a few days huh? its been a year!
| jj 8/29/09 . chapter 11
omg that was so halariously awkward! that was awesome!
| jj 8/25/09 . chapter 4
omg that last part was pure poetry! i love ur stories but seriously, u gotta cut down on all the mature material. and please dont tell me that i could just go read another story, because i have realized this. u could be a really great writer, but, judging by the way u r writing now, all ur gonna be able to publish as a book is a mature novel. and, really do u want that? maybe u need a reality check. idk about u, but i would want more repect than that. i would want to write a book that helps people, not helping the world dirty itself. just think about it!. P.S. dont worry, im still gonna read ur stories.
| tiny dancer 8/4/09 . chapter 1
you really need to put up the other story!