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Zion Angel
2009-03-03 . chapter 8
Oh, this is so sweet, or adorable, or thoughtful or angsty - whatever this is meant to be, it is, and it's great. And funny. Very, very nice. Carry on. :)
tamasit1
2009-02-24 . chapter 8
wow, interesting concept with this. i think tony is the perfect person to go back and take a second look at his childhood.
Lost and Found Puppy
2008-10-07 . chapter 1
nice line about Tony's smile in the last. Enjoyed them.
Sheryl Nantus
2008-08-30 . chapter 7
*swoons*

seriously... I don't think I've read better.

:D
JO
2008-08-30 . chapter 7
Oh that was nice and smutty, loved it.
Mollyscribbles
2008-08-03 . chapter 5
This is one of the best Iron Man fics I've read. Pepper does so much more than her job description . . . I do hope Tony gave her a raise once she realized the size of her workload.
tamasit1
2008-07-25 . chapter 6
Very bitter sweet.
the 85th writer
2008-07-25 . chapter 6
Beautifully sweet and funny, with just a touch of bitterness. Lovely.
lizbet0
2008-07-25 . chapter 6
Er. Um. Hmm...

I don't know what this is, either, exactly.

But it's interesting! *grin*
AES13
2008-07-24 . chapter 5
All of these were fabulous! I think my favorite is the proposal because it's so funny but it also gives you a very good idea of where their relationship is with just a few, well thought out details. I kind of wish that you were continuing the last one though, because I think that was the start of a really great story. Love your writing!
Mindy
2008-07-24 . chapter 1
very nice...and oh so sweet.
you know these characters well.
lizbet0
2008-07-24 . chapter 5
These vignettes are all fun, but I particularly loved this one ("Things You Don't Expect")! Yolanda's wonderful! And your lines! Man, there are so many quotable lines that I don't dare start quoting them or this review will be pretty much the length of the story!

Lovely, lovely work! Thank you, thank you!
tamasit1
2008-07-24 . chapter 5
I love screaming in my car, it always makes me feel better.
tamasit1
2008-07-24 . chapter 4
I think this a lot, that Tony feels Pepper deserves better then him. She makes him a better person and she needs him to loosen her up. The last couple sentences of this one really got me.
tamasit1
2008-07-24 . chapter 3
That poor robot is always getting threatened,lol.
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